Mayumi

juan carlo luna May 8, 2010 15:18

are you and elli real life sisters?
juan carlo luna May 8, 2010 15:16

Hello! Go out and vote!
vote wisely!
choose wisely!
juan carlo luna May 8, 2010 13:03

I listen to different kinds of music. I listen to jazz, pop, rock, rnb and love songs.
I love beyonce, kylie minogue, justin timberlake, Iyas, charice, pink, paramore, parokya ni edgar, janno gibbs, freestyle, madonna, many more
Hong Ha May 8, 2010 12:41

Oh, and is the singer Big Mouth BM from your country, too? I have watched a video of her making the horse sound. I was so shock!! You know, her appearance . And her strange talent, too. It's just so...wow, and so... eww=))
Hong Ha May 8, 2010 12:26

Hi Mayumi!

Yes, I've watched it! Actually, that was the first video of her that I had ever watched. Since then, I totally love her!! She made a whole country proud of her...
mido May 8, 2010 6:06

i think you just need to keep going in your way and do what your heart wants becouse it's nothing like love moment with the one who you love and try to trust becouse you know that he can't let you go he can't lose you
Forget-me-Not May 7, 2010 22:17

Dearest Mayumi,
Thank you so much for the sweet poem you sent on my wall. It really touched my soul. Your page here is also inspiring . I am happy to be your friend.
Manuela
♥Tuna♥ May 7, 2010 16:28

So ... sorry friend I had disconnection :) inshallah we will talk another time :)
juan carlo luna May 7, 2010 6:44

hi!
I love the songs here on your page!
Expector Smith May 6, 2010 13:34

Hi mayumi

Thanks for your comment! I'd say your writing is already good, and it seems you are making progress every day.

As for 'connecting words or phrases', I can give you some examples here:
--first(ly), second(ly), to begin with, then
--moreover, what is more, again, also, in addition
--except for, instead, apart from this
--for example, for instance, such as
--however, in contrast, in the same way
--after all, anyway, none the less
--in the meantime, meanwhile
--so, therefore, thus, hence
--in conclusion, in short, to sum up
--by the way, incidentally, as for

It's a good idea to use some connecting words or phrases in your writing, which can make your meaning clearer.

Hope it helps!
Expector