Scattered Thoughts

How quiet he has turned! A river of thoughts, an ocean of words.  Feels so worthless turning in to dumb stone, once was shining like stars.  May be looking for the words of love in the faces, but found the barren lands.  No cultivation, no shrubs, no flowers.  The thirst of words was like a desert, found no quench, so drowned in his own tears.  Gone alone in travel of life, and lost in the winds. O, wind any news of him?  When gone in the hibernation, everyone forgot, hardly found in the bottom of the lines, the one, once was found on the top of the list.  Used to play with the fragile toys, now roaming hiding his wounds.  Looking behind again and again, with the desire to see whom he left.  Forgot that so much indifference would turn into ignorance from other side. No one is bound to be with you, if you are even not with you.  Turned quiet, no matter, became indifferent no matter, but left some traces of love behind so may be remembered by the well wishers.

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  • Onee:

    You also didn't understand, so the "thought are scattered"

    Thanks anyway for visiting, reading and comment.

  • ^^ What scattered thoughts!

  • Thanks saba for understanding.  Sometimes I feel this way...................all scattered!

  • Nice writing. At first, I didn't understand what you mean but after reading some comments I found it.
  • Ocean

    Thanks a lot for all the appreciations! Ocean

  •  Hi Mishaikh! That was totally Super and fruitful reading. Thanks for sharing.

  • Hey! hey!! Mayumi I didn't offend at all, rather I ENJOYED the comment.

    You rightly guessed about.................experiencing a writer's block.  Yes I do experience this occasionally.

    Your finding my writing "mysterious", thrills me.

    I totally agree with your remark "You leave clues but there are elements in your writings that are like puzzles making us form our own conclusion. And that is for me an exceptional quality of a great writer. "

    I often do so just to activate readers minds, like you said ".........always leave in deep thought".

    You are one of my desired readers Mayumi

  •  Rose Iris Will

    That's what I was expecting of readers "going in deep of the emotions in between the line".

    Thanks for being so considerate.

  • Hi Mishaik, 

    I hope you're not get offended of what I wrote on my comment. I didn't intend to do so. I just meant that maybe you are implying something (I guessed maybe you were experiencing a writer's block) and I guessed it wrong. 

    It's not that it missing something. I just thought your writings are mysterious and deep. I am personally attracted to your writings because you always leave me in a deep thought. You leave clues but there are elements in your writings that are like puzzles making us form our own conclusion. And that is for me an exceptional quality of a great writer. 

    Please know that you are one of the inspiring writers here. You encourage us to write our thoughts by your example. 

    mayumi 

  • Wow, Mishaikh. Scattered thoughts, indeed. The sense of your words isn't obvious at the first sight, but reading between the lines makes a mosaic with a clear image and meaning.

    I enjoyed reading your scattered thoughts,very much.
    Thanks, once more again for being so creative.

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