Writing Prompt ~ Future Perfect
By 4 PM tomorrow, I will have left for London. I won't be more in the South hemisphere of the Earth because the plane will probably have crossed the Equator. So, arriving there at 3 AM, I will count on the kindness of my friend Jack to pick me up at the airport entrance so late. He will have picked me up in his new and high-tech car: a Land Rover model 2014. Then, we'll have eaten something in downtown London, maybe a tasty pizza or hot-dog. After that, I will have got so sleepy that nothing could interest me more other than a smooth hotel bed. Next day, Jack will take me to a comprehensive sightseeing all over London beauties,and, as always, I will have taken so many pictures in my digital camera wherever I have gone there because I am a photo enthusiastic.
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Great writing! It's nice to see you practising this tricky tense. In the first sentence a different verb might work better, since it seems you are still on the plane. By 4pm I will have left for London. Or, "By 4pm I will have boarded a plane bound for London."
Also, this sentence is a little confusing because you used two different tenses:
Then, we'll go eating something in the London downtown, maybe, we'll've eaten a tasty pizza or hot-dog.
You could say: "We'll have eaten something in downtown London, maybe a tasty pizza or hotdog."