Writing Prompt ~ Sentence Lenght
Today is Sunday. A sunny, but cool autumn day in Budapest. I'm sitting and starring at Nature around me attentively. For a while, I could see all leaves of an oak falling out almost straight away in front of me. What's the reason? Don't matter because nature is wise ! But, it seems like trees get ready for water shortage period releasing their leaves all around environment. How could we go without mother Nature teachings? We have to value all its signals! It's worth stopping sometimes and taking a look at what the most interesting surrounds us. At the end, the park which I was, it was with a great red leave carpet dancing according to the direction of wind. The park visitants take cheerfully their children to meet up with all these natural beauties.Even when mankind will allow us to keep in touch with such sublime Nature?
Comments
Is the correct rewording: "...and taking a look at what the most interesting"...?
This is a nice writing piece. The first half flows very nicely because you have added some variety to your sentence length and structure. Let's work on improving this sentence.
It's worth stopping sometimes and take a look at what the more interesting surrounds us.
Hint: You need to keep the verbs parallel (stopping and taking).
Nice description.