When my days end ,darkness falls
Stars lose their shines , become black balls
Then , the death would find me
When I drown in pangs of death
And everyone leaves me
I will be in a dark loneliness
My dear ,I recommend you
To light a candle next to me
To delight my world out there
Then ,purify me by your chaste hands
Coffin me by your old wedding dress
With a touching melody ,recite me holy verse
It might give me everlasting peace
And say farewell to me, with your smiles
With your pink lips give me a kiss
All your blessing gifts are my needs
They are like water for plant seeds
Which would keep me alive a new
And happiest one in midst dark blue .
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Hi Scarlett:
There is no doubt my lines are depicting a lover , who losses his sight because he is about to die but his mind is still captivated by a very strong love feeling , which has been transformed into a will to his beloved .
It is very generous of you to comment on me .I feel so excited for that.
Many thanks Scarlett.
Thank you Arif for reading and commenting on it.
Thanks tawfeeq for such a wonderful time you give us by your words...
Is that: "Stars lose their shines, become black balls"? is that your bright eyes become dark without her as I was seeing via your words ?... :) thank you very much for sharing!
Hi Hala'
my dear friend ……………..
Today’s topic has a link to an immortal love ,which can overcome the death, love does not only defeat death as undying love, rather it can revive itself again in the world out there .it revives by a smile from her and a reciting verse from her voice ...a touch from her hands..
Thank you dear for sharing me your blessing comment .I feel proud to get your nice words .
Hi Irina
Your nice comment has made my day .really I feel happy for your comment . O my Russian Friends , you are so friendly .
Hi M.Adaway
More poems and articles have been written about love and death than about any other work of literature. I try to depict romantic a conceit of an immortal love , love has strong power to defeat even death .Yes I agree with you , its sad poem as might be expected .
The old wedding dress has special remembrance of womens’ happy marriage.
Many thanks M.Adaway .My page is delighted by your nice comment .
Hi Your death angel .
Death is the most dreadful moment of Man in general. When it comes ,the first thing he thinks, is his lovers .So Man always is chased by the shadow of death , and he thinks he can go away for years , but eventually :
Then , the death would find me
When I drown in pangs of death
Many thanks for nice comment dear.
It's a touching poem with deep meaning as usual . I like the way you describe death in silent and quietness way ,and the consolation is only a smile from her and a reciting verse from her voice ...a touch from her hands.. This poem has a great meaning of love :We spend our life running and running ,and when we die we need only just a feeling of peace and love nothing more !
Thank you Tawfeeq ! I hope you can always share us your valuable and wise words here and to read more from you !
Hello Tawfeeq!
You gathered all love for us this lovely poem!!!!!! Thanks!!!!!
I always remember the day when I met you here .It was blessing day. The memories haven’t erased from my mind yet.
What is the recompense for a person full of kindness and so helpful? I think , words like (thank you) are not sufficient enough to express my deep gratitude .
Your two poems and you inspire me to write my lines , so I thank you many times dear.
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