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The Moon Will Surely Be Full Moon

Posted by Onee-chan on January 31, 2015

Last night, I saw a crescent moon..

I talked to him...

"Hi moon, would you help me, please?" I asked.

"Sure, if I can, just say it!" replied the moon.

"I'm longing for someone. Would you mind to convey my greetings for him?" I asked sadly.

"Mm, it's not that I don't want to , but, I'm not that perfect to do so now. Now I'm a crescent moon, you can wait until I become a full moon..." He said to me, giving me a hope.

"Alright, moon, I will be waiting patiently. Please also say to him that I love him, I need him, he who made me have a big spirit to live 'till now."

Then, I went away with my weeping.

The moon also dimmed.

And I'm sure...the moon will surely be full moon.

~ Just a poem by me :)

love, poem

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Onee-chan November 30, 2015 4:41

Thank you dear Mohammad, I'm glad you like it. :)
Mohammad November 29, 2015 17:30

Onee, I like poems so much, it was a nice poem, keep it on.
Thanks for sharing
Onee-chan April 30, 2015 16:58

Hi Lara,, thank you very much for dropping by and liking my poem..:))
Onee-chan April 2, 2015 2:48

Thanks for reading and commenting, Seeker.
I'm really glad you like it. Thanks for kudos.
Yes, the moon looks beautiful up there. That's why I want talk to the moon, in totally nonsense. :D
Onee-chan March 9, 2015 15:00

Thanks for the support, Mr. Bob.

I'm glad you like it, Estanis. :)
Estanis March 8, 2015 18:52

Great poet :)
Mr. Bob February 16, 2015 8:07

Thanks for writing a blog. It is very helpful for learning English on this site.
Onee-chan February 10, 2015 1:45

Thanks, Expector Smith. I'll try my best. :)
Expector Smith February 9, 2015 5:40

Nice writing.

I hope to read more blogs by you. Keep writing!
Onee-chan February 3, 2015 2:09

Hi N Naim : Thanks,, just a foolish love. Actually I laugh to my self reading this poem. :D Yeah, I have some .. ^^