*In His Name*
Days after days were passing through
And I was waiting to see which way was true
Then wind arrived with a big message
It filled me in then it turned and flew
I was so scared for that part of time
Looking for someone, or even a sign
Wind told me the point but left me then
No one had the right, it was only mine
The great right to see, discover and choose
The great right to be, decide not to lose
Wind reminded me not to wander for long
Looking straight forward and watching the clues
I was waiting for someone to come
To tell me which way I should choose to run
Time was passing but I was still there
The fact was something which now seems a fun
I was waiting for long and I thought it's not fair
I was waiting for someone to give me my share
While the story was in fact different
I was waiting for someone who was there
Roads are here, which one is the fact
Where is my share, which has the greatest impact?
I forgot the point that I have to answer those
I forgot that I answer just through my act
The sun is shining, another day just came
I know that my days shouldn’t be the same
I choose my path, since it's due to me
I start right now not to be to blame
*Dear my EC friends!this is my latest poem.I'd be happy to hear your meticulous comments!*
*thanks!:-)*
Comments
Thanks for the time you spent on it!:)I'm really happy to see people trying to discover the exact depth of what they read!its a pleasure for me to inspire you for learning more,hope we all help eachother to learn more and better!thanks again!
Wish You All The Best
Thanks a lot for your comment.you greatly wrote your comprehension and that was exactly the point!:)you've been always kind towards me,I'm happy to have you here:)
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Wow! Nina! It's a wondeful poem! You've chosen an eternal topic about the choice in our life (especially when we're young). What way to choose? Roads ( and the fork in roads) are ancient metophors for the lifeline. We're free to choose but we don't really know beforehand what we're choosing between. So, it's always a very difficult decision. You're right nobody can make our choice for us, it's only our decision and we we should make it and live our life this way. I also like the wind metophor! You managed to express greatly everything you wanted to say!! I enjoyed reading your poem! You're very talented, Nina!
@ Dear Tara
really thanks for your comment,waiting to hear from you soon! :-)
You chose a lovely photograph to go with this beautiful poem. As with all poetry, I will need to read it a few times to get your message. This is my favourite verse:
I was waiting for long and I thought it's not fair
I was waiting for someone to give me my share
While the story was in fact different
I was waiting for someone who was there
@ Dear NOORANY
thanks for your comment my friend!you know what!every body feels lonely in a part of time and i believe that there is only one kind of lonliness which is worthwhile and thats spritual solitude...this kind may bring you sorrow but you bear it as you know a shiny future is going to come...you know the fact will be revealed and that will be your prosperous day!what im saying above is that we shouldnt stop ,we have to take step...thats what helps us to go through the real prosperity in life..the fact!
thanks again my friend..wish you best of luck!
@ Dear SIMA
really thanks for your comment!
your right!she has a heart of Gold!
wish you all the best!
hey My lil Sis is worry about you :) i mean noorany she has great heart :)"
Dear Nina ..yes we have to choice our way not waiting for some one ..this poem is full of emotion i really like it :)"