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I Want You

Posted by Onee-chan on June 25, 2015

I want to be the first that you see when you open your eyes
I want to be the last that you see when you intend to close your eyes
I want to be there in your every dream
I want to emblazion your days

I want to see your smiles
I want to see your laugh
I want to see your jokes
I want to feel your affection

I want to be there when you are weary
I want to be there when you are brittle
I want to be there when you feel you are lost
I want to be a part of your bliss

I want to go where ever you will go
I want to follow what you want
I want to hear your advice
I want you to be my king

Oh God, am I too selfish?
I just remembered my wish
Anyhow, I'm just a girl
that has desires and dreams
And all that remains is him

Oh God, give me a way
What should I do to face
this long and deepest feeling
To love him...

~.~

by Onee

(just my old poem) ^^

Thank you for reading :)

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N Naim September 6, 2015 7:14

Your own version of Unintended. Nicely done.
Onee-chan August 18, 2015 5:07

Mishaikh,, thanks for your explanation. Hope I'll find someday. :))

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Onee-chan August 13, 2015 3:49

Hi JP_TP and AliReza,, thank you so much for liking. :)
Onee-chan August 11, 2015 9:13

Ohh,, I'm surprised....So glad. The master of poem come to read and like my poem. I'm so honored. Thank you very much, brother arif saeed. :)

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Arif August 10, 2015 15:12

I really missed this wonderful poem.
Thank for sharing!
Onee-chan August 10, 2015 10:55

Nimzaf,, lol....thanks for your beautiful comment. I appreciate it so much. :)

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Onee-chan August 10, 2015 10:53

Mishaikh,, Does it mean to love God before others? Thanks for the new words and explanation. :)

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Onee-chan August 10, 2015 10:47

Hello Keen Learner, thank you dear for raising my blog. Many thanks for your compliment.

Keen,, you're right. Whatever we wish, it's just our wish. Allah who grants our wish. My deepest wish for your happiness, sister. :)
Nimzaf August 10, 2015 7:15

What a beautiful expressive poem.I can tell one the king that you have mentioned how Lucky.Oh I feel I born very early.
Mishaikh August 10, 2015 6:55

There is ONENESS when the LOVE reaches its APOGEE.