I was standing in a burning desert; the darkness was all around me. The heat of some unseen fire was increasing. It seemed as I was being taken somewhere, may be towards the fire, the heat was burning me even I was far away, it was suffocating me. Even in the darkness I saw far away there was a place, cool, full of greenery, trees covered with blossomed flowers, amongst them she was sitting. She was looking sad. Near her was flowing a fountain of cool clear water. That was a beautiful place. I wanted to call her, but no voice was coming out of my parching throat.
I again tried to call her; she turned towards me and stood up.
“Please get me out of here…. I am suffocating!” I was so weak that my voice hardly coming out.
She blossomed seeing me. There was great pleasure on her beautiful face and her eyes were glittering. She came to me and extended her hand to hold mine.
I held her hand strongly. “Please forgive me, I humiliated you, I was wrong, I was wrong all the way, I must not ignore you, I must not hide from you, I must not hurt you.”
I didn’t know what I was talking; I just wanted her to forgive me, so that I would get out of that hell. I kept pleading, and she was just smiling saying nothing.
Suddenly my eyes opened, and I found her bending over me.
“What happened? Was it a nightmare?” Her eyes were blood red, it seemed as she had being crying for long.
“Yes it was! But now it’s okay, I am with you, I missed you. You will not go away from me” I said, her hand was still in my sweating hand.
“This was what I wanted to say.” She inclined over my shoulder and closed her eyes.
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Thanks Onee for liking my effort!!
Sarah
Some one from my imagination!
Generally, when someone is blabbering while sleeping is all about what's the person has/saves in his/her heart. It's true. He made mistakes, and maybe she never knew it...
So, here....He's so lucky given a chance to be stay right beside her, still. Hope he would realize that he wouldn't do those mistakes anymore.
Again, you describe the scene very touching. A nightmare, ended with romantic scene.
Thanks for sharing your wonderful blog, Mishaikh. :)
who is she?
sooo nice ...
This is life Saba, it happens in life both ways.
It is a beautiful piece of writing like your previous writings but it differs with other writings, this time the man ignored the lady!
What a piece of writing! And, we should not hurt our love ones.
I am overwhelmed with joy seeing your comments. This is realy meant to me a lot.
Thanks again.
Oh my gosh. I was too excited to know the content of your message. I know it would be another exciting piece to read. Let me go back to your message. If you don't mind I posted it without your permission.
Your message said:
My post is waiting for your comments, Anele.
I hurriedly went over here and look what was waiting for me.
Hell! (lol)
__________________Thanks goodness. It was only a title, hahaha!
Let me read it first!
Aha....It's a good dream I guess. It's very timing. This man is guilty and his dream scolded him, hahaha. If not for this dream, he wouldn't be able to realize how he was hurting her loved one. Sometimes we are too confident to notice how we are hurting our loved ones. We tend to take everything for granted.
This man is lucky. He is given a chance to realize how much his girl means to him while he can still hold her and touch her warmth. Some people learn to realize this only when a loved one passes away and a warm touch is reciprocated by nothing but a cold, dead response.
I love it Mishaikh. Totally love this piece. Another masterpiece to consider! Thanks!
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