My History teacher is Anne. She's a middle-aged woman, even though, a high-spirited person. She has taught me several curiosities about world-famous figures in her thought-provoking classes. In the last class she played a full-length film about Napoleon Emperor's life. She explained to me that most of people are mistaken as to the real physical features of Napoleon. She told that he was an egocentric, small and fat French general. However he's remembered for his bravery in historical battlefields. I wasn't disappointed by teacher's comments, once, I've already heard about these personality features on a TV documentary. I learned that there isn't always a perfect, tall, rich, young and blonde emperor because historical facts are full of contradictory descriptions.
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Sorry for my mistakes in this challenge friends. I don't know how the post disappeared from my page overnigt, so, I couldn't finish properly.
Hi Dan.. Why did you use "he" in your third sentence? I think this is one of the typos because it does not agree with the last pronoun "her" in the same sentence.
He has taught me several curiosities about world-famous figures in her thought-provoking classes.
My History teacher calls Anne. Why would the History teacher call Anne? The next sentences have nothing to do with it. This sentence appears incongruent. I think you mean it as "My History teacher is Anne." or can be " My History teacher's name is Anne."
Your last sentence is also confusing - "I learned that there isn't always a perfect, tall, rich, young and blonde emperor is full of contradictory descriptions." The underlined words are not necessary here.
Great use of all the adjectives.
It can be so challenging for every learner here to correctly or properly use adjectives.
Can you fix the following sentences:
1. "My History teacher calls Anne."
2. "I wasn't disappointed by teacher's comments, once, I've already heard about these personality features on a TV documentary."
By the way, a few typos:
--"middled-aged" --> middle-aged
--"full-lenght" --> full-length
--"explained me" --> explained to me