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Posted by saba on April 8, 2016

Nice and Simple as an Iranian Lady

Yesterday, I went to a park to walk and enjoy the fresh smell of spring. It was a sunny day. A man was sitting on a bench, he was reading a newspaper. A little boy was sitting beside him, then a woman came with three ice-creams in her hands. She sat on the bench beside the little boy and gave him an ice-cream. The woman gave the man an ice-cream, too. They were a family.

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saba April 22, 2016 6:02

Dear Jet,

Thanks a lot for the like and feedback.
saba April 10, 2016 16:55

Hi abiba,

Thank you for the nice comment :)
saba April 9, 2016 13:12

Dear Mishaikh,

Thank you so much for the beautiful heading.

Your choice is really good :)
saba April 9, 2016 13:11

Dear Onee,

Thanks a lot for the nice comment.

Have fun in the park :)
saba April 9, 2016 13:10

Dear Evangelina,

Lol, funny song!

This is for those who scream for ice cream :)
saba April 9, 2016 13:08

Hi Expector,

Thank you very much for the nice comment and punctuation correction. It is highly appreciated.

I re-edited it :)
Mishaikh April 9, 2016 4:57

"A good happy family"

A suggested heading for your blog saba. Nice and simple as an Iranian lady.
Onee-chan April 9, 2016 1:13

Good work, saba! Now I feel like to go to a nice park here. :)

Thank you for sharing.
Expector Smith April 8, 2016 23:29

Excellent!

I'm glad you don't have difficulty using the articles.

By the way, be careful how to combine two sentences - you shouldn't have used a comma instead of a period or full stop. So, '...in her hands. She...' and '...an ice cream. The woman...'