You love someone else
Your moisty ticklish whisper near my ear
The dim, the slow, the low unheard of your voice i hear
As near as I could smell your dissolved scent in air
While struggle to pay attention with these distractions
Couldn't hear clearly but i know what you wanted to say,
You wanted to say that ' you love someone else
"nemat"
Comments
Keep writing! You are talented in using words. I enjoyed reading the short story like a poem. It shows it doesn't need many words to catch the attention of readers.
So sad
Write more!
At first hint , these poetic words are so wonderful , because the describe the happiness of lovers closeness , and I can say that u have really picked ur words right
However , the end is shocking and unexpected , it's bears the bad news of the final day of love . I enjoyed reading ur blog . Let's read more from u :)