You should come and see what has happened to me since you struck me out of your life. If you come you should bring all your courage to see me. It shouldn’t be nice at all. Friends say one should have a hard heart to bear this pain. I did have a broken heart. I should have been careful and didn’t trust you while you declared your love in the first place. I should have closed my heart, but unluckily I didn’t do any such thing. I shouldn’t have bought your story and be in myself. But I melted, which I shouldn’t be in the first place.
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Thanks Anah. Good to see you after a long time.
Yes, you are right Amal! Thanks.
nice blog!!!
Thanks saba for encouragement.
Thanks Smith for your guidance. Corrections made accordingly.
Nice blog, thanks for sharing.
Nice work!
You could try to fix the following two sentences:
1. "I shouldn’t buy your story and be in myself."
2. "But I melted, which I shouldn’t in the first place."
Tips: You should have used 'shouldn't have bought...' in the first sentence, and 'be in myself' doesn't make much sense, too.
In sentence 2, 'which I shouldn't ...' should be 'which I shouldn't have + past particle...'.
did have,
do have
please do sit down
When we have to stress upon some action this is so used.
I would like to have correction in case of any ambiguity.
Why I did have....instead of I had? Anyway nice blog as usual!