Writing challenge#11 A day in life of a tree on the beach

Alone in the seaside, still since ages. Many people passed by me . I had known a lot of secrets. I'm the old tree and the only one in this wide beach. I wish I could have very, very long legs in order to leave this place and to move away from this beach. I remembered that singer who sang a very long sad song which is full of melancholy. I don't know where he is now. He sat under my shadow then went. One day, very old day, a group of pirates had sit under my shadow , talked about a treasure map and where they could find it. No one knows if they found the treasure or not. Very nice teenagers sat under my shadow, I guessed 15 years ago. A girl and a boy their hands were crossed and they were looking to each other with eyes full of love. He whispered in her ears" I'll be for you and I'll not leave you". Today these teens become older they met again under my shadow by chance. She has three children now. when he passed in front of her he looked at her and said to himself:" where I saw this dumb woman?" and who is the dumb man who married her?" She looked at him and said to her self" I think I saw this face before but I didn't know where? I don't know which kind of women can marry him .How much he's an ugly one? The tree smiled because this man didn't know and this woman didn't know .She just knows. She sighed and didn't know why she remembered the old song of that singer!This picture from herehttp://www.flickr.com/photos/insashi/3438400374/

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angel September 29, 2009 4:06

hi
good story
may u be happy
DO THU HOANG YEN September 28, 2009 1:54

hi,
great ! I am impression on both the nice photo and your story.
Tara Benwell September 28, 2009 1:35

Hi Kamel,

Great job. With "wish" use "could". I wish I could have... or "I wish I had very, very long legs in order to leave this place and move away from this beach."
kamel Adas September 27, 2009 11:21

Hi Nadiyah,
Thanks for your kind words and for nice picture.Have a great day.
Kamel
kamel Adas September 27, 2009 11:20

Hi Salim,
Thanks a lot.Have a great day.
Nadiyah September 27, 2009 5:09

Hi Kamel,
alone ... in nice story
thanks for sharing me
kamel Adas September 26, 2009 15:59

Hi Nafis,
Thanks Nafis.No one can stop looking into the sea.Also to smell the breeze of the sea.It's something incredible,something magical like the music.
Peace
Kamel
Nafis September 26, 2009 15:34

Dear kamel,

Wow, nice story! The photo is so amazing. Can we ever be tired of looking at the sea?
Have a wonderful day,
Nafis
kamel Adas September 26, 2009 15:33

Hi Tara,
You don't know how much you make me happy with your encouraging words.Actually i'm not good at grammar but i tried to change it , is the sentence correct now?
I liked the idea of sequel ,so i invite the other members to share us and write their stories.Thanks a lot for your comment.
Peace
Kamel
Tara Benwell September 25, 2009 16:12

Kamel: Great story from this lonely tree! I love trees and I love beaches. What a pair. I love that you wrote about the tree knowing so many secrets. Wow! This is one of my favourite stories ever written by a student. Any chances on a sequel? I want to know about some of the other people who have sat beneath this tree. Great work! Can you fix the grammar in this sentence:
"I wish sometimes if I have very, very long legs to leave this place and move away, away from this beach."
(And nice job sharing the source for your photo!)

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