Writing Challenge: Terrifying Two - Line Tale

Terrible Night

She was asleep, she opened her eyes and saw a man, the man calmly passed her and went into another room, she was so scared, but went into that room...,the window was open, and the curtains were moving with the wind, it was a thief.

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  • Dear Behrad,

    Fortunately, she knew how to safely protect herself, she didn't yell out and stayed quiet.

  • Hi Dear Tara!

    Your story is much more scary than my story, especially because it happened in real, at such times we must be very cautious.

    BTW, your comment is a two-line terrifying tale :) thanks for sharing.

  • Hi Dear Setareh!

    I wish one day there is no thief at all, then there is no fear.

  • Hi Noa!

    The best way is to live in a house secured from burglars.

  • Dear Expector Smith,

    Thanks so much for your nice advice,

    I guess that I used the "subjects" a lot, but I'm not sure,

    I need to study and practice grammar for avoiding run-ons.

  • Dear Mary,

    Fortunately, It doesn't happen in real, I wrote it to take part in the challenge :)

  • Hi Elen!

    If a thief get in your house someday, then your fear is doubled, hope it never happen.

  • Hi Dear Estanis!

    ....She was so sad because EC was very important for her, so she bought another laptop.

    Lol, your comment is interesting, thanks :)

  • The thief, she was so lucky that the thief didn't hurt her, good job saba...

  • Ah! This actually happened to me once. It went like this. 

    I was taking a nap in my bedroom in the middle of the day when I heard some noise on my patio. I stood up to look through my curtains and a man's leg was half way through my window.

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