Writing Challenge: Fathers

This is my father!

He is my father, very unsocial and carefree.  We are his two kids, a son and a daughter, me.  I know my father loves me more than he loves my brother.  I enjoy this privilege being belong to a daughter loving family.  I have pictures when I was a child, I see myself sometimes in his laps, sometime riding on him and giggling.  I remember whenever by brother teased me or snatched my toys or color pencils or refuse to do anything asked, I used to phone my father and he always used to say, “what happened baita?, what he’s done now?  Is he teasing you again?  OH! Broke your toys!  Tut tut, ok don’t cry I will bring you the new ones, yes I won’t bring anything for him, just relax,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,”

I am now grown up,  and my brother is grown up too, and gone abroad, I am here alone to enjoy all the love, care and even a look full of affection of my father.   I am getting married by the end of this year.  My father is very happy (but sad too).  He uses to say these days,  “baita, what will I do when you are gone?”  This is my father!

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  • awesome! daddy's girl! :D

  • Nice, yes, you are being able to hide yourself...ha.ha..ha...!

  • Thanks for the tip Tara!

  • There is good writing challenge. Interesting blog.

  • Thanks Nawa for liking.

  • Nice story, I enjoy reading it.

    oh, The father is busy preparing the dowry for his daughter these days.

  • Dear noaslpls

    I am surly a man. This should be the quality of a writer (no matter how humble like me) can represent the feelings of all. I just put myself in the shoes of my daughter and tried to imagine how does my daughter can feel about me.

  • kaizen hey hey hey I am still a male, I just put myself in the shoes of my daughter, and try to imagine how does she feel about me.

    When I was writing this 'Writing challenge" this reaction from my friend was in my mind.....
    Thanks for liking this.

  • Nice blog, though now I'm a bit confuse. Seems this is your true story. But here you said that you're a daughter, but when I looked into your profile ... :) Anyway, it is indeed a nice blog.

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