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Posted by Onee-chan on November 5, 2017

A 50cm-wave Killed 10 People

Onee, Comedic Reporter

Sun Oct 22, 2017

GONESIA - 10 people has been reported died two days ago by a 50cm-wave on Croco Beach. Twenty people had been taken to the hospital before they finally died in the hospital room. The victims have not been identified yet, but six of them were ascertained as foreigners.

"The wave is actually not a dangerous one. It is presumed that those people had never seen such a wave in their whole life," the police explained.

Lots of people were on Croco Beach. But, many of them were saved from the accident. They ran as fast as possible to avoid the wave that chased after them.

"I saw it with my bare eyes that many of the victims were shocked to see the wave. I shouted telling them to run, but they did nothing nor did even move. They only stared at the 50-cm wave, seemed like hypnotized people. They fainted before being swept by the wave," said a witness who was saved from the accident.

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Thank you so much for reading. :D

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  • Onee-chan November 12, 2017 3:21

    Luci,

    Thanks for completing the news. :D Glad to know that you're saved from that.

    Thanks a lot for your comment. ^^

    Mishaikh,

    Woww! Thanks for writing two blogs for this. I really appreciate them. ^^

    Eva,

    Thank you for your interesting comment. I'm glad you like it. ^^

  • Evangelina November 10, 2017 8:04
    Onee,

    LoooL, very creative and funny as well. I couldn’t stop smiling especially reading about the 50cm wave.

    Thank you the comedic reporter of MyEC for sharing your this news report, so we should be careful of such weather in Gonesia :)
  • Mishaikh November 7, 2017 17:27

    Here is another one ONEE

    http://www.myenglishclub.com/profiles/blogs/blog-on-onee-s-writing-...

    Blog on Onee's Writing challenge
      I read Onee’s comment she posted on her own recent blog addressing to me, she commented: ““C'mon.... You just need to make a news report. How about…
  • Mishaikh November 7, 2017 16:17

    Here is my participation Onee

    http://www.myenglishclub.com/profiles/blogs/weathere-forecast

    Hope the readers will enjoy.........it is a new thing from me.

    Weather Forecast
    This is in response to Onee's Writing Challenge A News Report WEATHER FORECAST Here is the forecast for next 24 hours.  This is not good news for t…
  • Luci November 7, 2017 5:44
    Oh damnnn...I was there but survived! Won't ever forget this worst moment of my life! 50cm wave trying to sweep me - wanted to kill me!!! Luckily I survived as I got so shocked and without realizing it - I hold my breath! When it was over I had to run away from Croco beach because there were so many dead bodies around. I stayed in the jungle and promised myself I would never approach the sea!
    Hehee what an awesome news report, Onee.....funny and that's what I liked about it ;) how the hell someone could think it was real ? :D lmao
  • Onee-chan November 6, 2017 9:19

    Mishaikh,

    I wrote there "Onee, COMEDIC REPORTER". I'm sorry if this is not a funny joke. ^^ It's not real at all.

    Thanks for your comment. ^^

    Bet,

    Yeah, I knew it. I was just trying to make some irrational event, kidding. My aim was just to write a news report and use Passive. :D ^^

    Thank you for your comment. ^^

  • Onee-chan November 6, 2017 9:18

    Elen,

    Thanks for sharing your laugh. Happy you like it. :D

    Estanis,

    I've just realized that this was a horror, too. OMG!! :o

    Thank you for your comment. ^^

    Roman,

    Sure, it's not real. You see there's no country named GONESIA. And, where's Croco Beach? It was just my imagination. :D The one who shouted at them is a witness in the news. ^^

    Thank you for your comment and like, dear Roman. ^^

  • bet November 6, 2017 5:16

    Misha seems to be good at math and as well as  in calculation! Yes, usually in coastal areas people are died by waves that are more than 6/7 feet high. It happens due to cyclone, t tsunami.

  • Mishaikh November 6, 2017 0:44

    How a 50 cm (20 inches) high wave kill any one?

    Is this a satire?

  • Roman November 6, 2017 0:14

    Hi Onee! Bad news, but I hope that it is fiction, is it? And where were you in that momment when you shouted to them?

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