Writing Challenge #14: Spring Is Coming To Town!

The Lyric Adaptation:Spring is coming to townWe better speak outWe better not shoutBetter not fightI’m telling you whySpring is coming to townWe’re making a fistAnd our heart beating for peaceWanna be like a blowing windSpring is coming to townWe see the world in where we’re dancingWe know when we should break fastingWe know if you have been wicked or virtuousSo be brave for freedom sake!We better speak outWe better not shoutBetter not fightI’m telling you whySpring is coming to townSpring is coming to town~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~The original Lyric:~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Santa Claus Is Coming To TownYou better watch outYou better not cryBetter not poutI'm telling you whySanta Claus is coming to townHe's making a list,And checking it twice;Gonna find out Who's naughty and nice.Santa Claus is coming to townHe sees you when you're sleepingHe knows when you're awakeHe knows if you've been bad or goodSo be good for goodness sake!O! You better watch out!You better not cry.Better not pout, I'm telling you why.Santa Claus is coming to town.Santa Claus is coming to town.Enjoy your time,Nafis

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Nafis December 18, 2009 18:02

Dear Adaway, thanks a lot for encouraging words and reading the poem.
Nafis December 18, 2009 18:01

Dear Tala, I wish New Year be full of healthiness and bliss for you. Thanks for reading!
Nafis December 15, 2009 13:10

Dear Yuya,

So glad you liked it and thanks a lot for reading.

Have a great time,
Nafis
Yuya Mori December 15, 2009 4:34

Very very beautiful.
I like it^^
Nafis December 14, 2009 13:31

Dear Riya,

Thanks a lot for encouraging me and for reading the poem.

Have a great time,
Nafis
Nafis December 14, 2009 13:31

Dear Zhao,
So glad that you liked it. Thanks for reading and encouraging words.

Have a terrific time,
Nafis
Nafis December 14, 2009 13:30

Dear Tara,

Thank you so much. I am so grateful that you liked it.

Have a wonderful time,
Nafis
Zhao Yuli December 13, 2009 15:18

beautiful and enjoyable.
Tara Benwell December 13, 2009 15:07

Nafis!!!!!!! Wow! You worked very hard on this adaptation. My children always sing the original version. I think I should start singing yours. It is cold here now! I wish Spring would come to town soon. I'm going to make a fist around February. :)
Nafis December 13, 2009 14:41

Dear Salim,

Thanks a lot for inspiring words. So glad that you liked it.

Have a terrific time,
Nafis

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