Who is She

she does not let me laugh, neither let me cry 
she, my heart does not let me do anything. 

you are asking me to give you my heart's desire 
a child never gives up his toys. 

I myself facing the confusion day and night. 
I do not let anyone to bear this load. 

she often says,  there is space in her heart 
but still does not let me in. 

Who is she, I am not aware of, 
who does not allow me to love anyone else. 

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  • Thanks saba for your appreciation and encourage as always.

  • Hello Mishaikh

    Nice poem!

    She wants to be loved but does not like to be a lover.
  • @bet. Thanks a lot for your nice comment. It is my pleasure that you like it.
  • Oh...my...really is she  like this?!...Now in my this age I think to be forthright is good for everyone, they do not like to play with their emotions nor with others....but, yes, if we have not people like this sort of then how we can write our superb poems....lol

  • Thanks rose for your comment. Yes there is feeling of confusion on either of them........lover and beloved.
  • There are feelings of a confused heart that want to find the way into another heart without not being aware who she is. You only know she is the one who let you cry and laugh at the same time and the one who let your emotions ride a roller coaster.

    Once again such an impressive poem, Mishaikh.
    Thanks for sharing.

  • Thanks Roman for your time to read and posting comment.

    Yes may be!

  • Hi Mishaikh!

    What a weird person she is! :D

    Maybe she is just confused with her feelings.

  • Lady Anne,

    This is life full of people and their different sorts, may be this one be unique.

    Thanks for the comment.

    Good to see you available for EC

  • Thanks a lot Tanya.  I am happy you like it.

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