Up in the sky

He told me about his wonderful journey; when the sun shines in the sky; she takes us up to the sky by her fingertips.  He described how beautiful it is to look at the earth from up in the sky. He told me how he transformed from liquid form into gas form; something like cloud. He told me how he was moved by wind every where in the sky and when the time was ripe he came back to earth again in shape of drop. He narrated his long journey among forest, fields, rivers and finally back to ocean. I asked him what the best part of his journey was; he replied: when he was up there he saw eyes which were looking and waiting for him and his friends.  He saw how plants, beautiful flowers and even humans wither away if he was late. He saw the happiness and tears of joy in the eyes of those who had waited so long, so the best moment for him was when he came down from the sky joyfully and to become part of their happiness.  Now I was ready to start my journey. I was ready to start my adventure. I am waiting for the sun to take me up.

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  • Dear friends I am sorry for my belated reply. Dear Rhaani,Grace,Softice and Saba thanks a lot for your wonderful comments.
    Dear Softice I am sure you would write it more beutiful than I did. Just give it a try. Then you would have my applause.
  • Nicly written, yes, many people in desert or semi desert lands especially farmers impatiently waiting for rain.

  • Are you talking about the rain? So interesting. I can' t imagine if the rain can talk like that.: D

    You are the well narrative writer sister.

  • Dear Nimzaf, thanks for your kind comment.
    Dear ELF Noor, I am so glad that you like my post. Actually rain gives life to everything on earth.
    Dear Petrichor, your comment conveyed your positive energy to me. Thanks a million.
    Dear Elena, thanks for reading and leaving your comment.
  • Dear Expector, so many thanks for your encouragement. I try to do my best.
  • Nice story setareh :)

  • awesome blog, nicely written, i really enjoyed while going through your blog. everyone likes rain, and wait for the rain in summer, former wait for rain because of their field.. some people wait for rain for enjoying.. there are many reason for waiting, but its true each and everybody wait for rain.. keep writing.. thanks for sharing..

    keep writing...

  • What a nice and admirable blog.Very good writing.So short and so sweet.Don't give up keep writing very often.Thanks for sharing.
  • Excellent! You've got an amazing writing style. 

    I really enjoyed reading this. Rain can be so desirable.

    Keep blogging!

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