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  • hey sweet, what a great point of you

    thanks on your reply ...

    -Nadiyah-
  • dear nadiyah
    i got it late but not too late .its a bit difficult to reply bcoz God don,t give us any option just do.
  • fa :

    Reply
    again!
    reply
    keep the
    gain
    but
    don't lose
    pain
    you need it

    in the black
    day
    when you have to
    pay
    the price of his
    reply

    my reply :

    why
    I have to
    pay?

    didn't you need it
    too?

    thanks fa for reply ...

    -Nadiyah-
  • hello my dear mayumee,
    totally right about this photo, a beetle trying hard to help the flowers to find the pieces of the puzzle, hoping that more perfect her life ... I knew that she needed a reply ...

    a great point of you, mayumee.
    you catch all in it ... (you know, I stole it from the fa's page ... hehehe ...)

    yeah, I'm looking for the precise formulation in accordance with my character in the writing of poem, maybe I prefer a style in fa's poem ...
    thank for reading and the comment here ... nice!

    -Nadiyah-
  • Hi Sweet Nadiyah...

    GReat Photo....the photo has an element of puzzle like the poem content..

    I think this is a one great example of a freestyle writing! A poem isn't always have to have a rhyming verse..You give justice to it cos it is full of emotions and feelings...Every lines have meaning that every broken heart can relate....

    Love it so much Nadiyah! The genius in you has awaken through this lovely poem of you...

    Take care...mayumee
  • Hi Nebia,
    you're really my soulmate! you can reading in my mind and feeling
    I wish may the replay of God be the best and fast in my life,
    thank you million times, what a great point of you!

    reply ...
    but just reply
    I hope ....................

    -Nadiyah-
  • Hey soulmate you are very poetic! Is it because of the romantic film we are watching all the time dreaming of the perfect life!!!!
    I felt a real sorrow in it dear. If you accept I will always reply to you even without anything sent!
    May the replay of God be the best and fast in your life and everyday will be the day of the reply of all........
  • dear Nadira,
    thank you for your encourage!

    -Nadiyah-
  • all the best
    budding poet
    very nice poem

    nadira
  • your appreciation make me fly ... it's nice by you
    thanks so much, dear Suela ...

    -Nadiyah-
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