I broke my pen
my favorite thing
I couldn't describe
my true agony
behind my words
there are silent screams
no one can feel
my sorrow
my tears never lie
but I'm hiding them
under the night shadow
I couldn't stop thinking
of whom I love..
my best fellow
who left me alone
In this narrow world
and gone far away
I broke my pen
my favorite thing
I wish I could describe
my true agony.
Comments
next time may we read another with happier note.
you seem to be blessed in using the pen.
all the very best
nadira
my true agony
So..this is not only a simple poem..I think this is a brilliant poem!..You have your own style of writing poem by presenting it through figure of speech..I don't know exactly what it is called..I think you gave justice to your poem by using personification to your subject pen...Very creative and very sensitive...
You've got a fan in me,
mayumee
Thanks for sharing it,
mayumee