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poem challenge : Lassitude

Posted by I'm trying to change on December 5, 2016

Hi guys :It's my first time to have a challenge .This challenge is a little hard because some of the words are new so I need to understand their meaning and to use them in sentences.I wrote this poem to take the first step to be a great poet like Shakespeare :) .... kiddingThis is my try :Somebody was nearBut I didn't careHe left me in a bad attitudeNow iam in lassitudeYou were a liarWhen you lit the fireThe fire of love..BTW : Lassitude means tired ...I don't know it's other meaningAn excellent poet ? Huh:D

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I'm trying to change December 6, 2016 11:20

Thanks Onee for this ♡♡♡.
Onee-chan December 6, 2016 8:59

Hi, I'm trying... :)

I'm glad to see you participate the challenge. Your simply poem is very good. You deliver the message very well. :)

Btw, lassitude is a noun. So it should be 'Now I am in lassitude'

Thank you so much for participating....... I guess Shakespeare is near to you...*kidding. You have a talent in this for sure. Keep it up! ^_^
I'm trying to change December 5, 2016 20:13

Evangeline, :))
Your words really pleased me♡♡
Thanks,
I'm trying to change December 5, 2016 20:12

Risty,, Thank you . Your comment is very supportive:))))
I'm trying to change December 5, 2016 20:10

AG, Thanks for your nice comment :))))
Risty (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻ December 5, 2016 15:55

ITTC, not bad for your first time, keep it up. Hope to see you writing some blogs in the future. :)
AG December 5, 2016 14:22

Oh Wow..

"You were a liar
When you lit the fire
The fire of love.."

What a strong words.. it's really a step to Shakespeare :)
I'm trying to change December 5, 2016 11:39

Serene,, Thanks for your nice comment:) :):)
Someone December 5, 2016 8:36

WoW! so nice poem, it can touch heart even being short. Thanks trying change.