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Posted by Achan Malaka on June 30, 2010

I Only Need Little LoveThe sun always shares its light to the worldI hope that you can give me somethingI do not ask too much from youI only need little loveThe desert is totally hot and ferociousBut, there is an oasisPlease, I do not ask too much from youI only need little loveThe animal like ants always even help their friendsI hope you could understandI do not ask too much from youI only need little loveAt least, if I ask you a questionPlease answer it with little love.

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Achan Malaka February 2, 2011 12:20

Is that so? Thanks so much, dear.
Mayumi February 2, 2011 12:04

Oh sooooo Romantic Poem!

Please write another one, Achan. You have talent in poetry..Simply captivating!
Achan Malaka October 18, 2010 13:41

Hello Sakr and Lamegogo..

Reading your lovely comments makes me levitating through the sky. I have never considered that I am a romantic guy actually...
Thanks a bunch
lamegogo depari October 8, 2010 7:42

hahahaha ....My Romantic Lil Brother. Taken easy Achan, I'll give all the love I have for you. Do you want it? :D ...ummm, please say " No I don't want" , if you say " Yes I do" I will run away from youuuu....hihihi because we have same gender, right??? *LOL...only jokes my man.

I think you're nice & very romantic person, whoever be your lover surely She will happy having u man. :D
Achan Malaka July 4, 2010 3:49

Thank you for commenting on this poem..I am very glad. This is my first poem actually
Lynne June 30, 2010 22:11

Thanks for sharing with us your lovely poem.
We all need a love so true.
I wish you a nice day.
-Lynne-
Nadira June 30, 2010 14:03

who can live without love ,
all living things need to survive and flourish
with love and understanding
to have joy and peace
in this transit world