Mayumi's Poem no. 5

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"You Painted Me Blue"

 

Why you hummed me the sweetest tune

Then sang me that sad love song

Why you wrote me that love letter

Then you'd say it doesn't matter

Why you had said you'll always care

But the effort had never been there

Why you made me dream of a beautiful world

Then let me woke up alone in my own

Why you promised me you'd be there

Then you kept me searching everywhere

Why you whispered me words of love

Then it seems you'll never be back

Why you said I am the one for you

But in the end...you painted my heart blue.

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  • Fizzy, I love your cute face here...It makes my page ever cuter because of this..
    Thanks for your comments..I feel cute because of your cuteness! cutie, cute, cute!
  • i love this poem the most.. great job.. well done mayumee

    \(^-^)/ love it
  • Hi, Ima Jay,

    Thank you for approving my poem!
  • Hello Nafis,

    Thanks for visiting my page...and reading my poem..Glad you liked it...

    Happy easy Sunday morning,
    mayumee...
  • My dearest Oppah,

    What I think for me that keeps me inspired to write poem one after the other is those friends like you who has so much confidence in me...Thank you for your all encouragement and kind support to me...And for your time to correct me...I really appreciate the effort you've given me...Jajaja.I'm so dramatic as you've always known me...But this is true...what I'm trying to say are all coming from the bottom of my grateful heart!

    Thanks again,
    mayumee
  • Wow! so well-done! I love it!!!
  • Hi, Mayumee! I think you have a great talent in writings as a writer, even as a poetic writer. Your expressions on your writings, your poems & ideas in a poetic sense of thinking & thoughts are exceptional & extraordinary. Therefore, keep trying! One day, I am so sure that you will yourself anthologize a collection of your own poems.
  • Dear Anjana,

    Thanks for your comment....I appreciate it, really...
  • My dearest Sister Elli,

    Elli Sis...Thank you so much for liking my poem, my BIF...I wrote it in my notebook last night as I couldn't sleep...Because those words kept flowing in my head..So I just jot down the draft then today, wrote here..It's me..whenever pop up in my mind, my mind won't settle down 'till I do something about it....

    Love you Sis,
    mayumee
  • DEar Atika,

    Oh, thank you for the words...if only you could answer....It means a lot to me...
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