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Mayumi's Poem no. 4

Posted by Mayumi on May 8, 2010

Hold my hand, never let go Pictures, Images and Photos

 

In Rhyme

 

Holding

Touching

And grasping..... the slightest hope

Listening

Hearing

The beating..... of my heart from my soul

Searching

Seeking

Just wond'ring..... what' are your thoughts

Smiling

Rejoicing

So soothing..... to know it's me there who I can find

Hoping

Wanting

Wishing..... you to be mine, my one, blissful perfect rhyme.

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  • Mayumi May 21, 2010 6:27
    Hi Mr. Night,

    Oh, thanks Mr. Night..I appreciate what you said..
  • Mr_Night May 21, 2010 5:52
    Your poem is Simple yet its very touching and deep, you structured it in a rhythmic way which makes the reader enjoy every line of it.Well done, Night.
  • Mayumi May 8, 2010 11:16
    Hello Expector,

    Wow, I will wait for your poem Expector...
    I had an idea of this writing style because of our friend Fa...One of the great poet here in MyEC...

    'till next time again,
    mayumee
  • Expector Smith May 8, 2010 10:57
    Interesting poem! I'll try write one like this.
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