That was a memorable evening, she was convincing me her love, saying, she would die without me. But one day she left me alone, shocked. There remained no love, no relationship, all gone as I did not exist. Was it a lie, she used to say, she was mine and mine only? I couldn;t believe. But I am sure, one day miss me and be ashamed leaving me behind.
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Wow Dewi! Your comment is a blog in itself. Thanks for your kind suggestion. But since I have taken the idea from poetry, and poetic expression of emotions are sometimes extreme. That is why you have found those expression not as normal.
Thanks anyway.
first of all, die without me << I don't like that sentence, so i never trust it. Love << this word I trust. But to me what important is Have a big heart. Cos every meeting have to end. The love, care... from a person it is not always she/he must be yours, and also not always stay with u in physique, sometimes what we think not always true in reality, we can't judge it just from one side. Like you wrote >> one day she left me alone.
be ashamed leaving me behind<< how can you sure bout that ? , to me it's better just think >> one day miss me. If we think this way good impact will close to you and you can forgive her, give yourself a chance to move on and realize that there is a good lesson that you must know and learn. So next time you won't get the same hurt, or even if you get but for sure not as bad as before and you can easily free from that. Honestly I believe there always have a reason till it cannot be avoided and to them to decide that also not easy , need great courage to do that ( hurting other's heart).
Well , that all just the way I think.
It's late now , 12.33 am .
Good night and thank you , Mishaikh.
Thanks for your comprehensive comment @SNR
Hi mishaikh,
True love in today's world is just a word. Love is an illusion which everyone wants to feel when they try to touch it vanishes like a soap bubble which at first sight looks so attractive but cannot be owned and kept.
This is sad reality of love nowadays.
Very true saba. Thanks for coming. You remember saba, I have been enjoying your comments since I jointed EC. You are of of the oldest member here in EC. Thanks once again for this consistency.
Perhaps someday she regrets for what she did. Those who betray others, they will pay it back.
Thanks dara for the encouragement.
Youssef - Glosky Thank you both for endorsing your comment and all the appreciations.
Bahut acha hain, Mishaikh sahib! It is a big piece of thought. Thanks for sharing.
@Youssef, thanks for appreciating my point of view. :)
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