Childhood
I want to go back to that time
When happiness means toffees and chocolates,
When sorrow means broken toys,
When highest place on the earth means dad’s shoulder,
When touching the roof in the father's arm means touching the sky,
I want to go back to that time
When protective place on earth means in the mom’s arms,
When victories means finishing plate fast,
When goodbye means till tomorrow,
When attending event means wearing new clothes,
I want to go back to that time
When sophisticated work means doing home/school work,
When waking early in the morning seemed hardest moment in the world,
When result of fighting was just angriness for a while,
When forgetting sad moments was easy,
I want to go back to that time
When everything around seemed colorful,
When butterflies of happiness seemed around flying,
When thoughts was limited to wants,
When Unawareness of everything made that life beautiful,
I want to go back to that time
When everyone seemed sincere,
When there was no concept of responsibilities and hating,
When there was no concept of rich and poor,
When everyone loved me, and I loved everyone,
I want to go back to that time
written by Me (Elf Noor) :)
1st tried.. 1st poem type blog
Took main idea of this poem from the Internet
If any grammatical mistakes in this blog then correct these mistakes.:)
Comments
#A.j thanks for appreciation. I am glad to see your comment.
#TaNjiN yeah.. childhood is the one time only where everyone want to go.. A time of freedom. thanks for stopping by.
#Mishaikh we don't understand good or bad condition in childhood, that was a time when enjoyment, playing was everything.. but later when we mature to be able to understand something, then we discover that our condition in childhood was bad.. thanks for a comment.
I always miss it, though it was not very good at all!!
Thank you so much ELMAK for your comment and specially for correcting my Mistakes..!!!
This is a great poem about reminiscing childhood days.
Some minor corrections could help improve your message:
When thoughts was limited to wants, > When thoughts WERE limited to wants
When protective place on earth means in the mom’s arms, > When THE protective place on earth is to be embraced in MOTHER'S arms.
When there was no concept of rich and poor, > When there was NO DISTINCTION between rich and poor.
thanks Mephzibah Marit for you comment..
Anonymous you can share philosophies by writing blogs..,:)
Nice poem Noor...
thanks Anonymous for you nice advice.. i talk about general that whats change from childhood to now.. yeah you are right that it is depends on us that how we live our life. We can make it good or bad by our-self. We should remember just happiest moment of the past, and should stay in the present and try to make present day happy and valuable as we do not know about our tomorrow..
Thanks Expector for you comment. and i agree with you.. you are still young by heart..:)
Onee thanks for appreciating me. . yeah I miss my childhood happiest days..I always try to think happy moments.. thanks for your wish..:)
Expector Smith,, You're still young and handsome, in your writing style... :))
ELF Noor,,
Nice poem! Nicely done! Good rhyme, nice words you chose.
It seems you're really missing your childhood, when everything was in peace. But now we're adults. It's interesting to remember, but life must go on... *You know, every time I put a comment, I read almost all comments before me. And I agree with anonymous.
Wish we always have a great day, sister... :))
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