Hello friends,
I would like you to read my poem, to close your eyes then, to imagine all I tried to describe here and to feel nice for few seconds .. hope I am able to give you such feeling ;-)
F L O W E R I N G M E A D O W
I am laying in beautiful flowering meadow, feeling relaxed and free,
hiding myself, my thoughts, my secrets in the shadow of the tree.
When I look up, I can see the leaves fluttering slowly in the breeze,
I wish I were one of them - to enjoy the movement with such ease.
I cought myself listening to the grass gently whispering in my ear,
if only the beauty of this amazing moment would never disappear.
Buzzy busy bees, all these talented birds singing their lovely melodies,
this sound makes me feel that all hatred died and everywhere is only peace.
During such magnificent moment I am just dreaming with closed eyes,
I am swimming in the ocean called flowering meadow, enjoying this paradise.
Comments
You have brought the context of your feelings through verse in a beautiful way ........
i feel it.it relaxed me and i forget my daily problems..thanks..
Very beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading it and watching the pics. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you all so much for liking it!!! Maybe one day I will come up with another one, let´s see :-) btw Ohnie, thanx for your correction, nobody noticed it :-D
Wow, Luz, didn't realize you have a talent, lol. Kidding!
I enjoyed reading this poem. I like it because I am able to understand the words, heheh. Not the deep, profound words that I have to google to make sense out of them. By the way, I "caught" a typo in your poem. Guess what? (^,*)
nice one luzzi ..........so did the bees sting you ?? i guess they were busy ......! :D
Very touchy, beautiful and mind relaxing!
Your poem is rich in feelings and emotions. This is the essence of Romanticism. I like it. More importantly, I like the Consonance you used in one of the lines. Just try to pick up the right words and make use of figures of speech. Wish you the best of LUCK! By the way, try to read W. Wordsworth's Daffodils. It's more related to your poem.
That's really cute
I like the pictures you've shared in your blog. You've really touched my heart with your words, actually we're the one who have destroyed the peace in our lives.
We forced ourselves not to sleep early, we forced ourselves not to sleep just to look normal like others. We've are the laziest people ever have in any century :D
We wanna enjoy a pick-nick but postpone our plans due to the laziness we are expert in finding excuses.
This is us who has to shape our lives, we proudly blame our faith for our boring lives. but this is us who has to decide ....I don't know what I'm talking :D
its nice , do your best ???