I should have been smarter. Yes, now I know that one can hardly trust a man. I can't breathe, I can't eat nor live my life because my heart was broken! I would like to be once more again that one girl I used to be but how can I force my mind to change the way of thinking? Others keep on telling me: "You ought to be more rational than emotional." Pfff, I know this all, however reality might differ. I must overcome it, otherwise it will soon kill me! Firstly, I must get myself together. Secondly, I need to get my dignity back. I also shouldn't be so naive, I will be independent and free. So... where is a man of my dreams asking me on his knees: "May I spend the rest of my life with you?"
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You must have had a good talent in writing. You are usually the first to participate in Writing Challenge.
Malkeet, ooops.. I overlooked your comment :-o thank you for liking it ;-)
Camel, I would never believe that somebody is able to analyze my fictive blog, btw your comment is a way longer than blog itself :-D You should be politician! You are able to make big something of nothing.. I am still laughing at it and the last part with suicide.. hahahaaa :-D thanx for nice comment, friend!
setareh, me and love story? well, I am not so much into it but who knows, maybe one day :-)
Megaparsec, LMAO exactly, actually I have some emotions no matter what emotions they are but I was able to put them into this, even though they differ :-D
I guess you had to compress your burning emotions into this piece of writing. Just let them explode :D
Looool plzzzzz it is just my imagination. My heart is not broken...actually I am happy and you are right..I practised English and made up a fictive story ;-)
@Luci
How could you think you're too emotional? You're just trying to practice your writing skills. In fact, we really enjoyed reading you:)
You do sound like your heart was broken - you must have had a period of hard time. I think it might be a true story. Time will heal the wound, though. Don't be so cool - would you mind telling us more about the broken heart story?
Expector,
thank you for your lovely comment! I did my best to vomit all the emotions here and now I will be again cold :-D btw nice challenge!!!
Wow! Terrific! Perfect use of all the modals.
I can tell that it's just a piece of cake for you write a paragraph like this. I should have known you could write such a wonderful paragraph. I hope other members can follow suit and write such a paragraph by using all of the modals.
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