Anjie!

I was very much disappointed and dejected for what has happened this morning. I did not mean to hurt her, actually I didn’t mean anything. It was just a talk, a joke or just an addressing out of love, but she got angry. I was shocked to see her anger, which was due to nothing.


Her name was Angie, or what I call her.  Today when I saw her passing by ignoring me, I just called her "Kallo", it was all out of my zealous love, and nothing else, because I was very much attracted towards her by her ebony, shining skin, which was the integral part of her exotic beauty. I saw her this morning, she was a bit away, I called her but she didn’t hear me.  I called her again a bit louder, “Hey Angie!” She didn’t respond. I called her again, “Hey kallo!” She turned at once and threw a sight at me with her flashing eyes. I also admired her eyes a lot, but this time those eyes were showering fire upon me. I felt the heat emitting from her eyes. But the most painful thing was that she didn’t say a word and turned away. I was lost in gloom throughout the day.

In the evening, the sky was overcast with black clouds. It made me even sadder, because I was alone. I walked to the football ground and sat on one of the chairs. I was all lost just thinking about her. Now I realized how much I loved her. There had been no such pulse I ever felt for her, but now I was missing her very much. I was sitting in the downpour wetting myself to get rid of all the heat of which my heart was burning. I was staring in front trying to penetrate my sight through the curtain of the rain. There she was standing or just floating towards me out of the aqua-curtain. I leapt forward to hold her but cascade was just blurred out leaving the rain water in my hands.

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  • Roman Thanks for your appreciation.

    The word I used to which Tara objected, I cannot write. here.  The word I replaced with is "Kallo" and you can understand its meaning, which I had explained in next line.  See the meaning of 'ebonized' wich I had mentioned in the next sentence.

  • Ah... really. Thank you!

  • Hi Mishaikh! Nice story! I like the end of it most! "Leaving the rain water in my hands". As always I tried to imagine myself in this situation. I imagined that cold water qurtain, I tried to touch it, but it fell down to the ground... It is so disappointing.

    But to be honest I don't even know, what "Kallo" means. So I can only guess, why was she so angry...

    And what word did you use to replace that banned by Tara word?

    Thank you for sharing!!

  • nice imagination..Wish the last part is true..

  • great blog as usual :) 

    would love to hear more from you Mishaikh 

  • Mishaikh, what does kallo mean??? We all are dying to get to know that :D nice story, would like to read more ..like why she was in such mood etc :)
  • Don't be sad for that crazy Anjie!

  • Every person irrespective of gender has a KID within!

  • Go for plan B!

  • The event, (Plot of story) "SHE GOT ANGRY" is from the real life. The frame/script of the story is from my imagination.

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