One month ago I sent an e-mail to all my friends here in MyEC, I asked them to inspire me with words each should chose one so I can write poetry about them. It was a challenge, a great one. I got 25 requests from my friends.
During this time, I like any human, moved through good and hard times in my life, So some of the poems will look sad. Sorry about that.
Any way, I divided my blog into two parts because my blog will look very long if I posted all of them. The second part will be posted next week.
Part one contains 12 poems from MyEC friends
Tara " Language "
Valentine " Time "
Nadira " hatred and destruction "
Viviana v " Sunrise "
Sylwia " Separation "
Amber Lyn Dinges " Amber "
tania " Happiness "
Poetry amelya gucchi "Papa"
Olesya " Giraffe "
Mahasa " Love "
Natia orzhonia " OK "
Rema mohammad abdullah " Longing"
Now please, click on this first >>>> Poetry :)
Then follow below
" Language "
The Language between us is like a bridge
Without it we won't reach to one and another
Lets build it the way it should be build
To make the two worlds united to geather!
"Time"
Every tick is followed by tock
Time is not waiting when you are stuck
Reset your life like resetting a watch
Looking back is for sure a block
Take the journey of life like a flying duck
success does not need only a good luck!
" Hatred and destruction "
Hatred and destruction
This is how a criminal mind function
The fire burns every good
But it ashes soon to extinction!
" Sunrise "
Here comes the sun to rise after a long night
Telling us a new day has just born
Unfold your arms.. hug its rays
Let it light your dark path
Life that can't contain hope
Is unworthy to be called life.
"Separation"
Since we ve taken the road of separation
My smile left my face to the unknown
My heart became broken
I don't think if it can be fixed any soon
My soul is sadly knocking in my body every bone
So desperate I am in the prison of lonliness
Wishing you in my life again to be shown
No one can fill in my heart your room
No one can make me happy since you are gone
I know it is impossible to have you back
It's just like writing in the air
" And they lived happily ever after "
Unfortunately, It can't be read.
" Amber "
Amber like you have to be
From out side it looks pretty
What kept inside can never flee
Do the same with love.. live in glee
"Happiness"
If you got happiness.. you got every thing
It's the treasure behind a closed door
Find the right key that you believe in
To make your destiny reaches the ultimate score
" Papa "
One day he will be between my arms
Hearing him saying for the first time " Papa "
That word will move my caring heart
to hug my future son.. to kiss him on forehead
I think I will melt in fatherhood
And be the base of my family!
" Giraffe "
A giraffe can feed on high trees
But it hardly drinks water on ground
So does the person who fall in greed
Will always feel happiness is far beyond
" Love "
Love is a great thing to have...
It's the sport of hearts,
It's the joy of life...
You may seem like blind when you fall in love,
But in fact you become the opened eyes
When all around are blind.
" OK "
Is it OK to live with you the live that I haven't had
I'll save you in me.. My pearl..
Like a bivalve shell would do
You are my precious.. you are every thing I've got
They have to break me.. to get you.
" Longing "
I feel longing to be with you.. now more than ever
The cruelty of loneliness drowned me in suffer
Can my dreams defeat my nightmares?
Can my tongue say the word " I love you " ?
Every step I take forward I return two steps
I'm like a piece of wood floating on the sea for ever
Can you read my mind?
Can you feel my heart?
If yes..
I bet you will hear your name
Repeatedly in a sad tune
Something in me always tells me
When ever your around..
" Now or Never! "
" Now or Never! "
But I fail,... My attempts can't be born.
To be continued...
Comments
Wow... incredible!!
but, I need a poetry with a touching tone. regret feelings to papa etc.. something like that, could you re-fix that :(
Hi dear Mr_night
It was terrific. Everything was well-organised. You have a poweful creativity and brainstorming. Well done.
Sorry guys for the late replay. I faced problems with my PC.
@Tara, You made my day. I am really happy you liked it. About the recording, well, If you can click on the read colored “ Poetry “ Word, up there between the names and the poems, you will get the recording part. Thanks a lot dear Tara, you are really a great person and teacher in MyEC.
@ Sono, Thank you so much my dear friend. Looks like you write poetry too J happy to read your sweet words.
@Rabab, Salam alikoom dear. Yes, long time. I hope your fine. I’m Glad you liked my poems. Yea, Poetry is the best thing I do. To me it’s like the joy of flying in birds world, It’s like enjoy swimming in Fish world and It’s like the fun of crawling in the snake world. J Thank you Rabab!
@Martin, Thank you a lot my friend. I really feel happy when I see your comments in my blogs. I appreciate it. Next time you won’t miss it!
@ Nadira, Thumbs up J thank you so much dear friend for your support. I really appreciate our kind words.
@ anele, Hi dear, No Giraffes are not sad animals, they only have to stretch more and bend their body to reach the water that’s all. But the see things from higher view. I only used it as an example to describe how greed can take a person to reach a level when that person sees everything is under his hand, but still he doesn’t feel happy, like the giraffe facing hard time to reach the water which is right below it. Thank you for your nice words.
@ Valentine, Thank you so much my dear best friend, I really thank you for your support and kind words. I’m glad I made you happy making from your word a good poem. Thanks a lot. You will see the second part soon!
@ Mayumi, Hi dear, I’m glad you liked my poems. Really, you are a great poet too. I admire your work. Thank you so much.
@ Viviana, I felt happy when I saw “ One of your poems fan “ Really you made my day. I’m glad that you enjoyed my work. Thank you so much dear.
@ Naveed, Thanks a lot for your support. Glad you liked it.
"Night"
Cool gentle breeze blowing in silent night
Urge my heart to
Bathe in the white beam
O beauty of Night - Moon.
I liked your lyrics....
Truly amazing! I love the "Language" poem that I requested! Now, for another request...Would you record these for us? Or, recruit some friends to help...
Salaaam Mr.Night. How is my old friend?? :) Longtime no see.
That's really brilliant. I enjoyed it very much.
Woow you are truly a poet aren't you? ^_*
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