A poem of mine


This is one of my poem ..

Title: My two hands


My two hands
my left and my right
always fight

My right helps,
cares and loves

My left beats,
steals and hates

they don't belong to each other
tho they are twins

they all think they have to mend the other one
that's the only idea they share
getting no where
they're fighting

one day they challenged each other to taste their paths
and judge if the other way is the best to forever walk

My right hand got ill when it touched evil
the feeling of reaching sins
surrounded it with thoughts
that the sun has died and the darkness is its prison

My left hand shed tears
when it has done good for the first time
it saw the sun how it lights its heart
the tears burned every sin it made

now they shake each others
no more fighting!
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  • Wow! Very meaningful....I guess the theme of the poem is about good and evil..the light and the darkness...The Kindness and the hates...And again, you present it with a simple subject "hand" but really creative to make us show their conflicts and how at the end their situation got switched...

    You are very imaginative...I can't wait for your next poem...
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