Writing Prompt ~ Quite

I was quite shocked to see that you have deleted my name from your friends list, whereas I was quite right to be quite sure to think that I was getting quite close to you. May be you decided to quit me because of my quiet nature. On the contrary I quietly started to love you, but now it is quite surprising for me that you couldn’t feel my quiet love. It is quite right that sometimes I failed to respond to you and kept quiet. I should have to quit my quiet nature and broke my silence quite in time when it was needed. I shouldn’t be quiet, but be quite frank to express that though my love was quiet, it was quite high in truth and reality.

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  • AH Sewar, isn't is just a WAIL (Cry) came out of the bereaved heart?

  •       My friend, this passage is quite the best I have read this morning. Anyway my friend, are you quite sure that you want to be her or his friend after she or he have deleted your name from her or his friendship list?????? I'm not quite certain. But if you quite disagree with me, that's quite another story.

           Finally, your problem is really not quite a problem, but because your love for your friends is a quite real; you should search for the quite truth. God bless you my quite friend.

  • GREAT JOB FRIEND: AND YOU INSPIRED ME TO DO THIS

    Seeing own EC's friend list page, he was quite shocked to know that she removed him quietly.It was quite unpleasant for him.How could it happen so quietly? she was quite close to him.He didn't quite understand the situation and he too wanted to leave EC quietly.Sitting quietly in corner,he began to analyze current quiet situation. He used to be quite happy to chat her at EC rooms and responded her queries with quite eagerness though he missed sometimes.Slowly and quietly, he became quite close to her and his heart quietly started loving her.Although he was quite handsome,but his quite reserved nature kept him quiet from expressing his real love.Even though he seemed very quiet, his heart was quite restless,and whole EC became quite boring for him.Finally, he couldn't resist his quietness of his quite unstable and restless heart without her and he quietly channeled all his quiet feelings towards her through writing prompt quite clearly and frankly this time.

    We hope she will not remain quiet after reading about his quite worried condition and add him back quietly.

    P/S: Sorry Mishaikh hope you dont mind if I share your story this way.

    First i have posted it to my blog... I kinda felt like cheating because it was not my own idea. SO i delete there and pasted it here.

  • Anele
    Thanks for your beautiful comments.

    Modified aa advised.
    Thanks again

    I also take the opportunity to acknowledge the comments with thanks of Saba, Sandara, Vision, Expector, Afro, HB, Peaceful_girl and noaspls.

    Thanks again.

  • it's quite good

  • Quiet interesting blog.

  • It was quite interesting, Mish :D

    Nice work!

  • Yes, sometimes these words seem complicated to use, nice work!

  • Nice work!

    I agree with the corrections by Anele. 

  • Oh no, I was quite shocked to know that I deleted you!  It was quite unintentional.  But then, it was quite a blessing in disguise because I came to know that your quiet nature brought a new hope to this wonderful friendship of ours..... (the girl quietly replied.) 

    You omitted something here:

    I was quite shocked to see that you have deleted my name from your friends list, 

    though my love was quiet, but it was quite high in truth and reality. (because of "though", it is not necessary to add "but".  It will create only 2 dependent clauses.)

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