I am possessed for you.....
Emphasize me to contemplate that ...........
Yes, You adore me too.....
Likewise
In dimness Moon shines.....
It seems that Moon loves dimness........
And he comes to dismiss those dimness...
Through his splashing light.....
Emphasize me to contemplate that......
Yes, You adore me too......
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Okay Anum I have some questions for you so that you might help me to understand. You say......I am possessed for you...…..what are you possessed with??? Could you mean I am possessed by you or with you??? Who is the you that you are speaking of? I am not sure if you are saying I likewise adore you or if you are using "likewise" in comparing that adoration to the moon and it's dimness taken away by it's splashing light......what seems to be.....isn't. It is cloudy Anum…..not clear......as far as I am concerned it needs more.....I did try to write it below......but I still feel it is not clear. If I am misunderstanding I am sorry, but I am confused. I like Mishaikh feel it is a valiant try, and please continue to try.....if I can help you in anyway......I would be happy to try. Thank you for sharing......writing is a wonderful profession or hobby. Have a great day!!!!!
I am possessed by you
Emphasize my contemplation of that
Yes, you adore me
Likewise as I do you
In dimness the Moon shines
It seems to love dimness
Yet, it comes to dismiss that dimness
Through it's splashing light
Emphasize my contemplation of that
Yes, You adore me too
thanks Mishaikh :)
Good attempt Anum. Keep it up.