Writing Prompt ~ A Piece Of Advice

Dear Susan,

your latest letter made me sad so the only one thing I can do for you as your best friend is to give you some piece of advice I consider the most effective. I know that it isn't easy at all to live alone after divorce and I know that you find each and every advice people order you sort of unreal.  Anyway, Susan, life goes on and my advice is: "Get on with it, girl! Don't be stuck in the past better live in the present moment." Another word of advice, which is on my mind and might be useful is: "Try to go out, have fun with friends, just don't  sit alone at home." What do you think of it? I know very well that your friend Tina came up with advice like to work hard to forget about everything what hurt you and I fully agree but believe me that you can be even more active to feel once more again "alive".  Just get yourself together and listen to the closest ones who come up with sincere advice, who want to help you out of this stressful period of your life. One day when you remember it, I mean all those people giving you their best piece of advice, I am sure you will be laughing because some of their advice will suddenly seem so ridiculous. I don't want to be somebody who tells you how to live your life, I just care for you and I hope at least one of my advice made you little bit calm. I wish you were again able to see the world from more positive perspective.

Eternally yours, Luci

 

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  • seeker, thanx
  • expector, the thing is that I should have checked using of advice :)
    afro, you can't...some advice is correct if m not wrong and got tara
  • yes..advice has no plural form can I say some pieces of advice?

  • Yes, staying alone at home is definitely a no-no, which will make the situation worse. 

    "Advice" can be so tricky, and anyone here could benefit from the corrections made by Tara. 

  • Anah, Rasty, Md, thank you all for kind words BUT guys... read the comment written by tara and plz take your words and likes back :-D m sooooo ashamed of myself, hope I will survive it! Such silly 3 mistakes, just because I didn´t check using of expressions piece of advice and advice, silly me :-D thanx for corrections tara, next time I will be more careful.. 

  • commendable advice :P
    and nice blog....

  • Hi Luci, 

    Thanks for joining! It's tricky, isn't it? These ones need fixing. 

    as your best friend is to give you some piece of advice (Would you say "some piece of pie" or just "some pie"?)

    each and every advice (Good try, but here you need to count, so you need that "piece", "bit" or "word".)

    one of my advice made you little bit calm. (The expression "one of" has to be followed by a plural, so it can't work with "advice". You could change it to a different word, such as "ideas" or "tips".)

  • I guess your friend is lucky to have you there for her , great advice .
    Nice blog .

  • A good piece of advice is always appreciable. Luci dear thanks for  such a nice blog.

    :))

  • noas, loool it is fictive letter, m not that good :-D

    Komala, thank you so much and let me check out yours plus your record in the group, oh myy I almost forgot! 

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