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Writing Challenge: Uncountable Nouns

Posted by bluerose on February 3, 2012

Empty Quarter
in the Desert there Sand dunes the Weather In this area so hot Means this area of the drought a long period of dry weather when there is no enough water

there are have Sandstorm in the Empty Quarter,The wind speed is between 185 and 205 kilometers per hour In winter the Empty Quarter desert is very cold the a lot of Thunderstorms It also grows in the Empty Quarter, some of the shrubs and herbs

this my sharing in this challenge

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Comments

Asma February 7, 2012 14:46

Hello Bluerose..

I liked your style of writing, you have written a message and at the same time provided a lesson.

Nice try,I hope to do this like you.
Tara Benwell February 3, 2012 15:06

Hi Bluerose,

Thanks for trying this month's challenge. I love sand dunes! I think Oregon is my favourite place in the world so far. My kids love playing in the dunes too.

Let's work on the first half. You need to start with capitalization. Start a new sentence with a capital letter. Here is a lesson you can try.

In the desert there are sand dunes. The weather in this area is so hot. Drought is a long period of dry weather when there is not enough water.
bluerose February 3, 2012 3:45

thanks dear from my heart Nadiyah , this my try :)
Nadiyah February 3, 2012 3:26

weather ---> uncountable nouns