Page 175- From Anah’s Biography

     It was the day, when Anah was eagerly waiting for her result to be announced.

     His brother entered the room with a newspaper in his hand and gave Anah a confusing look. She was numb, frozen and shocked of what his brother is going to announce. In a single glimpse her mother recognized his brother’s gesture. And played a trick with her.

     Before Anah could take the paper from his brother, her mother interrupted and abruptly snatched the paper and pretended she has failed but, in fact she had passed her exams with great percentage. She got nervous, and burst into tears, went to her room without checking the newspaper. 

     Her mother’s intentions were to surprise Anah with something she wasn’t expecting. In the evening her mother, organized a small surprise party and invited her few close friends too.

     Anah was unaware of her mother’s plan. She came out of her room, whipping her tears off, tried to look normal. However, as soon as she stepped in, the hall where her family members used to sit there was no one. She muttered, mom? But, there was no answer.  She goes further, bumped with a table and immediately settled herself. Her brother switched on the lights. Her friends, siblings’ parents congratulated her and cherished her with great love. Anah’s emotions were not in her control. She burst out crying, when everyone hugged her.

     Anah’s feelings were indescribable. She was happy to see her family and friends celebrating her success with such interest.

I have shared the current page of my life in this challenge. I've actually passed my exams with great percentage. And it's bit fictional. However, the feelings I shared in the challenge are true. Lol. I was numb actually when I was going to hear my result. And when I heard I passed the exams. I actually burst into tears.

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  • Thanks for taking part in the challenge! Great writing. I'm glad you passed your exams. There is one thing I'm confused about. Are the exam marks in the newspaper? 

    Please check your usage of "his" vs. hers. 

    had failed is right (not was failed)

  • @Rusty!

    Thanks for dropping by. :D

  • @Behnam!

    Thanks for the warm response!

    I already mentioned that it's bit fictional. However, I will try to explain. 

    Ok.

    Anah was in a shock. She was just crying as she was told she has failed. So she was not in her senses. About the door-bell, so let me tell you it's mobile age :P and no one rings the bell instead they give a call. 

    I have cleared my marks improvement exams of Intermediate.

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  • Congrats anah for the result and :), thanks for sharing this happy moments with us , wish you many happy days like this one :D .

  • @Mishaikh Sir!

    I had a doubt for those sentences too. Thanks for pointing out the mistakes. Would you mind helping me with these errors?

    @Walker!

    Thanks for the correction. (blush) 

  • @Ratu! 

    Thanks a lot dear. I'm happy I had this day in my life! :D

    @Eva! 

    Aww, I don't have words to tell you how happy u made me by your lovely comments. Hugs! Thanks!

    @Strangii! 

    Thanks for dropping by. Yea, actually HER BROTHER. 

    @Setareh!

    Thanks so much for passing by dear! :)

    @Adaline!

    Thanks for the wishes! :)

    @Nizmaf Sir!

    Thank you for dropping a lovely comment. :)

  • Hi Anah, 

    First of all, I'd like to take this opportunity to congratulate you for that great achievement and success. I wish you more success and lasting happiness. 

    You have described your feelings very well. It is easy to follow the story, but it is unclear why  Anah didn't know what her mother was doing in living room while she was in her room! Was she asleep? If she was not asleep, she was supposed and expected as well to at least hear the bell rings people were using frequently to have the door opened, then to become curious about the events which had been happening out of her room! Anah should have welcomed her friends earlier than that! This part of the story seems unusual to me. 

    Please let us know what was the exam if you don't mind? I guess it had been something related to university entrance exam. Am I right? Congratulations! 

    All the best,

    Behnam, 31 August, 2015

  • Dear Anah CONGRATULATIONS for your great achievements. Good luck and wishing you all the best.
  • Dear Anah,

                     It's a lovely page in your Biography. I really enjoyed reading it. Felt like we all join with you in that happiest moment. So proud of you on your great achievement. May God bless you! Good luck for your future studies and job

  • Dear Anash, congratulations for your achievement. I wish the best of luck for you and your family.
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