WHY?

The pain and sorrow was in my fate
Would I complain-----why?
I didn't know how to live
Would I ask for life-----why?
When finally there was separation
Would I ask your company-----why?
You sank the boat of my love
Would I swim alone-----why?
I know you would not wipe my tears
Would I cry-----why?
She didn't turn to see me
Would I wave-----Why
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  • Indeed they are. ^_^ 

    I hope you find it. 

    Thanks. ^_*

  • Warda

    Yes comments are also very useful to learn and understand a topic.

  • Thanks Warda

    I will have to look for it. I will send you if I find.

    I am glad you like it.

  • Beautiful ! Just one word to describe it. 

    I thoroughly enjoyed reading all of the comments.

    This blog is going to be my favorite because of the poetry and the beautiful comments. 

    Do you mind, Sir (Papa) to send me the original text? 

    Thank you for sharing!  

  • Thanks for your reply, Mishaikh.


    You are right. The love isn't copyable. We can not transfer feelings from one to another. Only, if we are ready and we allow it ourselves, we can find a new love again. As each person is unique as unique is the love.The most precious feeling in our life. For some people only once to give.

     

  • Lady Noor.

    One must not stop writing poetry, if bestowed upon ability.  Please resume showing your talent also in this field, though I am already aware of your this quality, but please let others enjoy, too.

    The glimpses you have shown here in your comment, this is your versatility on the subject.  Bravo.

  • Comment by Rose 

    "Oh, did I wrong anything, Mishaikh? I just wonder because you replied all comments except my comment."

    I am so SORRY Rose, I didn’t ignore you, but I thought that I have already responded your comment. Prior to that I was lost in searching some appropriate words for your comment then when collected I might have used them somewhere else. 

    Any way you have very well explained the feeling of a person for his/her lost love. If there is ‘ego’ no question of crying, and begging for love.  In your remarks “But my WHY is, why do you want to drown in the swirl of life, without hope of love?” Yes, you are right there must be hope for further life, but as I have already commented, that a poet has a privilege of having word powers to express the shock he has faced on the ‘betrayal’ (though even for the a lover this is a heavy word to be used for his/her beloved). So here in this poem is the same privilege has been used. I agree with your notion “but there is still dignity, pride, and self-respect...the seeds for a new love.”  But for some “IF NOT YOU THEN NONE!”

  • Oh, did I wrong anything, Mishaikh? I just wonder because you replied all comments except my comment.

  • Lady Noor.
    Sure you may also try wite poem in this pattern.
  • Eva

    Thanks for explanation.  Yes sometimes dejection makes life stopped. But it's pressure of situation, may take time to recover meanwhile a poet at least has opportunity having word power to express his/her feelings.

    I will give it a try, as soon as a plot for the blog comes in my mind.

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