Only silence around me.
No noise destroys the silence.
Silence hurts me,
forces me to think.
Damn silence!
My soul asks me who I am.
I don't know the answer.
Have I lost myself?
Lost myself on my way?
Am I innovative?
Am I self-confident?
Am I independent?
Free and liberal, as I wanted to be?
Am I all of that?
My soul, why do you ask me?
Do you have doubts!
Don't hurt ME!
Who am I?
Only questions around me.
Questions destroy the silence.
Questions annoy me.
I don't want to answer.
Damn questions!
They ask me who I am!
Why they do that?
I haven't lost myself.
I am on my way again!
With my own goals!
I will be innovative
and self-confident again.
I will be independent!
Free and liberal, that I want to be?
I will be all of that
My soul doesn't ask anymore.
I found myself in silence.
I am I.
Rose Iris
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Ohhh Evangelina, I did forget to thank you for your German words. You wrote it's school German, so I assume you had German lessons at school?
Oh, yes, you are right Evangelina, I should read with much more attention. I really read your comment wrong.
It feels like an obligation for me to response to what you've written Miss Rose (please don't tell me to omit the Miss, I can't bear it anymore). Firstly, yes it is a praise but that was not too much, I stated a fact and when I enjoyed something I will say it, if not, either I will still state it or leave it. Lastly, it seems like you see me as a critic here, wherein I'm also subjected to criticism. :)
I like poems, and it's not every day that I can read good poems. :)
Hello Risty, dear! Please don't praise me too much ... maybe I become too proud .... LOL ... I never will be... don't worry. I'll wait for the day when you have to criticize something. I am sure that day will come...
Hello Batuhan, thanks for that poem. Of course is it much better and more professional written than my poem. To be sincere, I had not posted my contribution under the name POEM but everyone calls it so and so I don't want to refuse to say so, too. I know it hasn't the typical structure of a real poem but it seems some EC members do like it so as it it.
Thanks for your nice and encouraging words.
You have written the described personality in the poem by FAIGIE RABIN .... is a bit gloomy like your personality ... don't worry ... I am not afraid of you.
Hello Muskan, nice to read your comment. It seems you are a funny person.
Your word play about I(ce- cream) made me laugh and .... I love that damn ice-cream.
Dear Danny, thanks for encouraging me. I hope your praise isn't only politeness.
(Hahaha, if I was Luci, I would say you don't know what politeness is..... hahaha.)
Luciiiiiiiiiiiiii.... please forgive me my respectless words ... I am just joking !!!!!
Thanks so much for your comment.and for being a fan of me. Hahaha, it seems I become famous. I had to wait until I got old ... tooooooooooo late !!! We have in German the same saying like in English: Better late than never.... LOL.
Dear Evangelina, I have read your notice that you usually don't comment on blogs or challenges. You said you are just the reader and pleasure-lover. So I appreciate your comment much more. Thanks a lot.
You asked me why I have deleted my first contribution ..: I have written my answer on Luci's blog if you are interested in to read it.
You are right Evangelina, our entire life contains so many question and maybe we never get an answer ... but ... maybe we don't need always an answer... it makes or life interesting and exciting. Always to know what happens can be boring. We always should keep being curious, our life is an adventure until we die.
Do you know? I never write poems in my mother tongue... only in English... hahaha ... though my English skills are not that perfect. It's a challenge for me to find the right words.
To: Fr@nk, Rahul Wazir: thanks for reading my poem and your comments.
A heartfelt poem, once again proven such brilliant thoughts, Rose. :)
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