Now it is 1.30 am at your place,
Your face must be on your pillow, your thick hair must be piled up on the right side,
because you always sleep with your face down to the left, your hands always getting hold of, what is it you are looking for under the pillow?
I want to steal your time, sequester your attention, solely so I can get twisted into the fold of the sheets where your body is lying.
It has been three years .....28 months multiplied by 24 multiplied by 60 multiplied 60 multiplied 60 and I bet you the result will approximately 4.354.560.000
That's the number of millisecond since the first time I fell in love with you, the number could be more fantastic if you count it in nano scale, just check it if you don't trust me :-)))
and I dare to guarantee you are still there in every second and again and again....and again
But please understand me, this story is not intended to seduce you. Honesty is like an over color makeup, unimaginable to add it again with seduction. Those billions number was a mathematics fact. empirical, who says that love can not be logic. love can be extended dimensional figures and flavors at once....hmmmmmm new perspective huh???
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Now 2.30 am at your place,
time flies, Ive been here for an hour and still feel like I just came in, an hour will credit 216.000 millisecond on my time account, thank you I become richer,
I wish I could add Rupiah or Dollar or euro behind those numbers, but you are priceless, you are everything ...
I never know who is in your bed, I've never been there, maybe only pillows and bolsters, sometimes inanimate object get what we want most and we are not able to compete with it.
I envy your pajamas, your towel, and your bolster.....enough...stop I cant continue imagine it, how do we feel being hug without pretension? that's heaven....and people has to give a huge effort to get it, life is like a journey around the Sinai desert, we are not allowed to walk straight and easy to get the promising land.
Now give me permission to get sleep, to catch you up to an abstract world where everything can be met, be sure you are there don't wake up bacause of nightmare, wait for me....
there are so much things I wanna talk about, we can do everything right? but if I could choose, I will choose one thing: I want to have a dream,sleep beside you and my hand under the pillow where your hands always getting hold off...because nothing is more wonderful than love of a couple in the morning, with oily face, smell of their sweat, bed breath, messy hair and awful face..they still dare to say "good morning love" to each other...........
this story come from undeeply observation about virtual world,many interviews with the vampire and this is the weakest conclusion That I got, enjoy it, I have no bad intention only fun conclusion, please don't get offended ......Peace on earth!!!!!!
Comments
Ratu, how we can make our own blog. Please also let me know the necessities.
Oussama,
thank you very much, I am considering to create my own blog site, and you are encouraging me to do it...
many friend suggest me to start collecting my short story, but I'm not into it yet, I still have to learn more, may be i will take writing class on this holiday.
to be a writer we need more than just 2 or 3 good stories, I have to do many things and I doubt myself can do it. consistency is important....there are many thing to do to get in to that point and I still compile my puzzle.
thanks again I really appreciate your encouraging comment
WoW, awesome;
I appreciated your authentic thoughts, your deep and natural analysis.
When a person come to write something, he forgets some of his ideas and he ignores others, to avoid the reader's judgments. Often, this person thinks all the day about somethings (a lot of things) and, After all, he writes about other things (or nothing).
Although I am a scientist, I feel that a good writer is one who can write his raw ideas without filtering, without thinking about others opinions or judgments, without thinking a lot, without trying to come up with a miraculous or a perfect blog/book ... I felt that, when I read your blog. I encourage continue and to keep your eyes on the next steps (writing books; building your professional website/blog .... ).
Cheers;
Beethoven hehehe....
thank you, it so nice compliment and a challenge for me at the same time to keep learning and improving my writing ability, I thank you for all nice attention and critics, for me that's a great appreciation, so happy to be here among good people who has the same aim, ........improving English together
Dear April,
Thank you for your encouraging comment, really happy to have you here
Ratu dear, you keep surprising me each and every time with you new blogs, keep it up!
they still dare to say "good morning love" to each other...........
Later on even they find it hard to avoid lie down again seeing the creases on the bed sheet retelling the entire story.................................
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