I wanted to hear your whisper, to feel the ticklish of your warm breath. I wanted to say something
to make you feel what I feel while hearing your whisper
I wanted to dance in joy to explore the life by your side
just with you forever!.
Sister...I want to be a part of your morning, with coffee and a slice of last night dream....sharing the sweet and bitter feeling, hehehe th anks for sharing
oh..so many nice comments! I just opened my computer and found it, thanks everyone for your inspiring comments. Honestly I feel the urge to write more when I find you reading my lowly poems.
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I like it and also we wanted to keep our FRIENDSHIP forever.
I wanted to hear your whisper,
to feel the ticklish of your warm breath.
I wanted to say something
to make you feel what I feel while hearing your whisper
I wanted to dance in joy to explore the life by your side
just with you forever!.
This is not a correction.
really nice and lovely poem.. I liked it
keep writing..thanks for sharing..
oh..so many nice comments! I just opened my computer and found it, thanks everyone for your inspiring comments. Honestly I feel the urge to write more when I find you reading my lowly poems.
I keep wanting
Do you want the same as me
Honey
I want
...
Very good! Thanks for sharing Afro!