Posted by
Ravtan on May 23, 2012
Warm wind is blowing and painting over the dry field with brown color. Leaves are flying away from trees and try to ride on the cloud. Small hills can not move but think to stop clouds. Blue sky is throwing some clouds looks like announcement of the rain.
Comments
Thank you Mr. Bob. I have tried to change tense.
I like this just the way it is. The sentences change from present tense to past and you might fix that easily if you want to. The way it is, it paints a nice picture with words. I will message you about the tense agreement and you can decide if you want to change anything.
Very poetic!
Spelling tip: field; leaves