The heart of an angel
If you win an angel's heart, never try to lie
he find out the truth and his trust will die.
If you hurt an angel's heart and he says goodbye,
you will beg him to forgive and he agrees to stay.
If you start to be too sure and you lose your path
then you start to lie again, you don't expect his wrath.
Angel's heart can be hurt and his soul can bleed.
You don't see it while you care only for YOUR need.
You are sure the angel's heart always will forgive.
but before his wings get weak... he decides to leave.
If you want the angel stays with you all your life,
then you have to care for truth and keep the love alive.
Angels have a heart as big as you will never know,
but this heart is fast away as fast as wind will blow.
So you have it in your hands what keeps the angel stay.
don't do things what able is to make his heart let cry.
Rose Iris
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Dear Soto bhai, thanks for your nice comment on my blog. I always appreciate your opinion so much. I try to express feelings in my poems and it is a pleasure for me when people understand and feel the same while reading my poems. I know my poems are not perfect written English but I don't care about ... it's more important for me to share it.
Thanks a lot for your comment Soto bhai.
Dear Respected Sister, Just AWESOME poem. I think its so heart touching & meaningful. How nicely you written here a deep feelings.
I liked it so sooo much and I think your beautiful poem matching in anyone real life also. I like to read your another great posting soon. Thanks for sharing.
You are very smart, Mishaikh... and it's true what you mentioned.
Dara Gino, I did listen to the song... I can't find any similarities, but the song is really nice.
Ich wies ist nich, but your title reminds me of that song, Heart of Gold by Niel Young. it says, (I want to live I want to give) They are close to your lines. Thanks for sharing!
You are sure the angel's heart always will forgive.
If he is a real angel yes, he will always forgive. It not, then he is not an angel, he is human.
Dear Lady Noor... as you said, it isn't to get the love of an angel. Many people just can see what they had when they have lost it.
Dear Risty Aven, poems show sometimes the reality and sometimes also the fantasy. We often call a beloved person, who protects and accomands us like an guardian angel through tough times, as an angel. It can be a real or an imagined person. So you can understand the angel of my poem also as an parable.
Hello, Ms. Rose, I was touched by your poem, but I can’t imagine how to love an angel-like human does, for me, they are here guiding and protecting us spiritually. Although I can’t physically see them, still I believe they are around and continuously battling for our immaterial welfare, a faithful assistance to our weaknesses.
Nice to see around again, hope to see more poem from you in the future. Thank you.
thanks for your advice, I always appreciate it. I did change some parts of my poem