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  • Anele , If I delete the poem from the design , the design will be sufficient enough to express itself by itself .the eyes above will say

    (I have accumulated a treasury merits since I met you here. I become a poet and a writer , can express myself because I find my community and feel safety)

    You pictures speak clearly more than the poem . I love your pictures as much as you love my poem .you are great Anele , and  your friends should be poets to sing you nice songs and tell you amazing stories.
    Thank you very much Anele

  • Yas …..you are so clever. As I always expect you . she is the fifth season . She comes to add another years to his age .
    Thank you for sharing me you nice comment .

  • I think the other season is the season which the poet met her. Am I right? :)

    Great poem Tawfeeq! I loved it!

  • Really ! You thought that it came from the net?
    That means my poem is good ! You make me feel proud dear .I feel as if I am a real poet ,not just a simple learner.

    I think the significance of these lines comes from its sincerity .They are good for light that throws on inner of a sad man . A man sits rigid with bitterness . He shrinks a little from contact with his community . A man has been forced to live among them .Although he is differs from them . Your design depict this state .The eyes and tears and fallen leaves all these images are wonderful .

    Later on ,he meets his lover to change him ,to lift him form vanity . And you depict this state by paint a nice face of woman .

    I admire your design .You have endless good skills . When it comes to express my admiration for your personality , I become free from rigid or traditional fetters, because you always inspire me by endless nice thoughts , make me floating in the clouds of reverie .

    Thank you Anele .

  • Anele !!! Just (like it )….imm …what about my recitation?
    Anyway . thank you my dear.

  • Robbie,thank you again my dear friend.

  • Mitran , it is nice to see your comment in my page thank you very much for sharing me.

  • Hala , I like your quotation “" Keep love in your heart .A life without it is like a sunless garden when the flowers are dead "
    - Oscar Wilde

    The poem contains the same conception , It talks about a man .He distances himself from his community. He feels as a stranger , an alone man , lives on fringes of life . His clock ticks towards target date . Eventually ,he sees the light at end of the tunnel .It is a light of hope and love . The optimism wishes come . Time is ripe for new dawn ,new starting . The love comes to tackle him from the circle of limbo . Although four season have gone but there is an auspicious season waits .The season will turn the clock back ,to gives that man life anew .

    Thank you very much dear .

  • Keira ,thank you dear for sharing me your nice comment .

  • You're very much welcome, dear friend! : )

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