The day I saw you

You were alone and quiet.

No one noticed you, nor recognized you.

You asked, no one answered.

You talked but, no one listened.

 

 


My face concealed the sadness in my heart.

In my heart, I kept my true feeling.

The tears I hide behind the smiles.

Is my true feeling that struggles to survive.

 

 


My whispers were shouts that resonated with clear meaning.

But, was ignored while you rejoiced.

That day came when I knocked on each one's door but, had only seen much pain and rejection.

The day came... that day came.

The day you saw me was the day I said goodbye!

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  • Nadiyah have you really asked your love one to come back to you? ^_^
  • Thank you Nadiyah.
    -Lynne-
  • glad to see you laugh, Lynne. I hope it can reduce a little your sadness.
    I'm always with you ...

    -Nadiyah-
  • hahahahaha...
    Thanks for your comment Nadiyah. ^_^
    -Lynne-
  • yes, of course! why not? hahaha ... it's a luck!

    keep it up!

    "Imagination is more important than knowledge. "
    ~ Albert Einstein


    -Nadiyah-
  • hahahahaha... do you really mean to just keep my imagination Nadiyah? ^_^
  • often a imagination gives us a more meaningful life. I can solve my own problem with the imagination. it feels life easier be faced with

    thank you, Lynne ... keep your imagination,
    it will enrich your self, good luck!

    -Nadiyah-
  • This writing was just pure imagination Nadiyah. Even the title I couldn't get a suitable title. (You can think of a good title for me, if you wish ^_^) These words just came to my mind so suddenly. I don't know if it makes sense. Then I just realized what separates us from the others. :(
    -Lynne-
  • Nadiyah, sometimes I have a feeling that reality separates us from alot of things. How about you Nadiyah?
    -Lynne-
  • ask to your love, whether he wants to return?
    I always ask him and ... I never get his answer ...

    -Nadiyah-
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