hi every one
this is my first Poem I have write , it describe my thoughts & feeling , please tell my your opinion about it .and many thanks for you .
I traveled to the brume city …
That no traca to any walking …
Clearly … until you standing …
Memories will pass …
You step … fall ..
You will stop to see the hardest times In your life ..
The sadness … the sorrow …
leave & lost …
No way to comeback , but the hope still alive ..
There are many colors of lights ..
Colors of the rainbow ..
Out of a small window ..
In there …
I still lonely in the brume city .
Comments
Hi ilike this very much
you have sense of selender
keep writing
Best
Hello M. Adaway
thanks my friend M. Adaway for your support , I really appreciate !
I had written all of it my self but these words I got it from a normal dictionary , when i search about it i found the word (spoor) is wrong & i mean (trace ). The other word brume i found it mean (fog) dictioanry.com http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/brumethe beom was not complete now i edit it