READER'S DISCRETION ADVISED !

Striker casts a spell and a doorway opens , it seemed like a Black hole , everyone looked at it in an astonishing manner , Striker asks everyone to enter , everyone was hesitating especially Marcus , Striker posed a smile on his face and gave a little confident look .

Striker : Its Okay , we are with you , this is the only way and we have to do this .

A look of relief appeared on Marcus's face and the he entered the doorway, following him everyone entered and in the last Striker entered and closed the doorway.

A Dark Place was in front of them , no light , just complete darkness surrounding all corners , the white magicians castes a spell , their hands looked like flaring fire , a white fire , they shoot the white fire in all corners and then Striker slams the hollow surface and light flickers a bit but then it disappears again .

Striker: Well this shows that they are quite near , this is a circle of protection , and we must stay inside it as we proceed further .

Marcus was shivering and so was Suzanne , Alpha was looking here and there in astonishment , as the group was moving more further the more serious expressions begin to appear on Striker's face and so thus suddenly a voice came .....

'' WELL WELL WELL , MADE IT HERE , WELL DONE "

The group stopped moving suddenly and Marcus and Alpha begin to panic as Suzanne holds on to her nerves , the voice continues 

'' YOU THINK A MERE DEFENSE CIRCLE CAN LIMIT MY ACTIONS TO YOU , ANSWER ME YOU BRAT ! STRIKER ! ''

Striker : There is no reason for you to hide , come out if you have what it takes ! 

''MY OH MY , LOOK WHO'S TALKING , A BRAT ! , CHALLENGING I , THE GENERAL , THE MEDIEVAL WARRIOR , YOU THINK YOU HAVE THE GUTS TO COME FACE TO FACE WITH ME , I SYCAN , THE ANCIENT SPIRIT  !''

Suddenly a flash back comes to Suzanne's mind about the dream she saw , in which she saw the medieval commander preparing to punish the prisoners , as Suzanne was thinking about her dream a sudden force hit the defense wall and the light flickered , Striker suddenly jumped and hit the floor again to regenerate the defense circle 

Striker: It seems like the defense circle has been damaged.

Suddenly a second strike of energy HITS ! and the white light scatters and vanishes .

''MY OH MY HAHAHA , THE TINY LITTLE DEFENSE HAS BEEN BROKEN , IT WILL BE FUN TO PLAY WITH YOU BRATS !!!''

Striker: Your dealing with me now !

Striker jumps forward and a complete silence surrounds and then a vivid image of a large figure can be seen walking towards the group , the marching steps were loud and then they stop in some distance. ! 

THE LAST CHAPTER IS AROUND THE CORNER , PLEASE SHARE YOUR COMMENTS , THANK YOU ! . 

  

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  • You are welcome :)

  • SNR thanks , lol , i hope you do that , they shouldn't take much time to read as you have quite good reading skills indeed. 

  • Thank you Eman , you have always encouraged me to write stories , the last chapters are around the corner , thanks for staying in the entire journey of this story.

  • Thank you very much Roman , i am happy that you find this story Epic and like the ideas in it ,Thank you for helping me out with the font colour problem also. 

  • Thank you very much Paula , you have encouraged me a lot in the entire journey of this story , you have helped me in my vocabulary and also have fixed many of my grammatical errors since the beginning , I thank you for your efforts throughout the journey and I respect your opinion regarding the last chapter and you are absolutely right , so i have decided to add one more chapter , making next chapter the second last one.

  • Thanks A lot SP , I like your enthusiasm , your read all the chapters way back and then came back to this one , Awesome. 

  • This is...  AMAZING!

    I have no words to express, how much I like the end of this chapter!

    It is SOOOOO EPIC!

    What a great idea with that magic defencive circle.

    And how cool is that SYCAN. He broke that circle with just two range attacks!

    And his steps at the end. It is really interesting! 

    I am eager to read the last chapter! :)

  • Knight.....good job!!  I had forgotten about Suzanne's dream......but you tied it into this chapter......love that........I am still going to say try harder on your English.......but yet even with some problems I can still get what you are meaning.  Once all chapters are here and finished I am going to go back and read it all as a whole........but I am still excited about reading the next one......I am wondering how you are going to tie all this up as finished in one last chapter .........can you do it???  I will wait and see.......might need 2 or so.....LOL........but you have held us through this entire thing .......so it says a lot about you and the effort you have put forth........great job!!!!!!!!Signed one of your biggest fans!!!

  • hey knight , actually I was reading each chapter and I stopped at chapter 5, so I had to repeat them all lol.
    even though, I did that without boredom, you wrote nice, and I'm looking forward to read the last chapter :D
    Well Done , Keep it up!

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