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Posted by never-released on March 27, 2011

I never meant to lie on you

you are my only true

you are the only way I want to go through

please don't let go

all the world doesn't matter

no one can love me better

what can I do to let you see

what you really mean to me

I will do whatever

just to be together

no one else I want to live with forever

how do I with a new life start

you promise you will never forget my heart

but do you forget our nights

the time we spent with delight

I know that it wasn't right

you are my only light

to bear my life's sight

for you I'm ready to fight

having you,I have nothing to fear

stay beside me forever my dear

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never-released March 30, 2011 21:08

thanks for your comment...I'm glad you like it...of course it will be my pleasure if you give me any advice...as I don't consider too much grammar while writing poems ..just my emotions
Stuart Nauen March 30, 2011 20:54

I think it is very nice! It's hard to express yourself so well in another language, it's impressive. Would you like some grammar advice? To perfect what you have written?
Irina March 28, 2011 18:53

It's an excellent poem!!!!!!! thanks.
Nadira March 28, 2011 2:34

original and full of talent
never-released March 27, 2011 21:50

what do you think of my writings?