Sentence Variety: Writing Challenge:

How many ways can you rewrite, expand, reorder, reword these ten boring sentences ?1. The sky is blueExample:Blue skies like these make my day.There isn't a cloud in the sky.It's a clear day.You won't get a finer day than today.The sky is as blue as the sea.Have you ever seen such a blue sky?What a fine day!2 I am sick.I don’t feel good, i think i am ill.Most of the time, when i am sick, i can do nothing !To be sick is a waste of time and money !Sickness as cancer is devastating as it takes the patient so much energy to go through,if he/she ever doesWhen sick, people should always keep a positive attitude as it’s the best way to cure.3 I have school tomorrowThe day after today i have to go to schoolNext day, holidays are over and i must go to schoolTomorow, i am supposed to go to school even if i don’t feel like it !To go to school is a great opportunity not all the children in the world have.Teachers at school must be courageous, as, nowadays, to manage kids and to teachthem something is, for me, one of the hardest job in the world.4 My room is smallMy room is not largeMy room is so small that beside my bed, i have hardly no space enough for otherfurnituresMy bedroom is so tiny that it’s always a mess as there is no place enough to straighteneverything i have.I would prefer to have a larger room, it would be more confortable for me.To heat a small room is cheaper than to heat a bigger one.5 Andrea is busyAndrea has not free time now and can’t come with us to the movie theaterAndrea would be happier if he didn’t have so many things to do.For Andrea, to be always so busy is tiring, he kills himself at work !Andrea wishes he could have more spare time, it would give him more opportunities tomake sports.Andrea’s job keeps him busy fifteen hours a day.6 There is nothing to doIt’s quite boring to have nothing to do ! It gives us the feeling the day will never end.Doctors said there is nothing else to do about her illness, than to accept it.To be angry because of the bad weather won’t help, as there is nothing we can do tochange it.If we can not change a fact that bothers us, we should accept it.If there is nothing to do for you today, you should take the children to the playground7 It’s cold in this houseThe heat is too low in this house, we should turn the heater system on.No wonder we catch the flew in such a freezing house.This house is not warm enough, we should open the curtains so the sun can comethrough the windows and warm it up.I would really appreciate to have a few more degrees in this house.In this house, I have the feeling i am a white bear at the North Pole8 I don’t want to be lateI have a meeting and i’d better be on time.My mother always used to tell us that to be on time is the main polite way to showrespect to people who wait for us.I have to go as i don’t want my friend to wait for me.I have to run as my appointment is in fourty minutes and i must drive through the citycenter.9 I am hungryI am starving, i should quickly find something to eat.Would be nice if i could feed my hungry mouth !Long time i haven’t eaten something, i am so hungry i could eat a horse.Isn’t a shame ? I feel hungry even if i ate one hour ago !Looking at you fixing dinner makes me feel hungry.10 It’s WendesdayToday is the third day of the week, two more to go and it will be the weekend.Yesterday was Tuesday, can you guess what day is today ?Usually, in my country, children never go to school on Wendesday Afternoon.Still 3 days to go before Sunday.Today is Ash Wendesday for Christians, soon it will be Easter.
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  • helo,
    very usefull thanks
  • Hello Selma,

    Thanks Selma, would be great to have Tara's opinion about this :))

    Hugs, Manuela
  • Heyy, Manuela,
    I am very happy that you did it as well. :-))
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